Dance of the Pianist


As the pianist played, the rain fell.
As the rain fell, the thunder sang.
As the thunder sang, the lightning danced.
As the lightning danced, the pianist played.

Thunder and music.

Lightning and rain.

Harmonious. Togetherness. Nature and sound.
Dancing. And playing. Music abounds.

In tune.

In rhythm.

Inside and out.

The pianist plays as the rains come down.

Thunder. Now birdsong. Raindrops galore.
Both nature and musician need to give more.

Sunlight breaks through the gaps in the cloud.
If bright light was sound, this is very loud.
Competing with birdsong
And the pianists’ keys
And the patter of raindrops
And the rustle of leaves

The pianist continues.

More thunder claps.

More sunshine through the clouds’ many gaps.

The birdsong and chatter continue with glee.
The thunder rumbles on, although distantly.
The raindrops still fall, but now gentle and light.
And the pianist still plays, to his delight.

A rainbow appears to join in the dance

As if by magic

As if by chance.

Each by itself. All as one.

On and on.
And on.
And on.

Into the future. The days ahead.
The pianist will play to the tune in his head.

To sunshine.

To birdsong.

To moonlight.

To life.

To raindrops and thunder.

To daytime and night.

As nature calls, the pianist will play.

Their dance, their togetherness, will be on display.

The dance will continue.

Through sunshine and rain.

Not always different.

Not always the same.

The pianist will play as the rains come to call
Through thunder and lightning.

In fact, through it all.

I first put this together back in 2012, although at the time I didn’t feel it was complete. Or complete enough, if that makes sense, but at the time any extra words I used didn’t seem to fit in with the flow.

I’ve revisited this little creation today, and added a few extra lines, plus an extra level of perception to indicate the passing of time.

I remember writing the first part one evening in 2012, as I was playing a video I’d found on You Tube of heavy rain in a tropical rain forest somewhere, and from there I just went with where my imagination took me (Not that I do that very often, I must add!) I have no idea what forced me to look for a tropical rainstorm in the first place, although it could have been simply to find inspiration for this post. Well, the first post, not this one. Obviously.

Although I have no clue as to who the pianist is (it certainly isn’t me as I haven’t got a musical bone in my body!), I’m beginning to see him (or her, although I did use the word ‘his’ in one or two of the lines) as the heart, beating its way though everything, from beginning to end. The dance, in this case, is life. And the weather and wildlife indicate all of the different events we come across on a daily basis.

See. I told you… my imagination is running away with me again. It could also just be about an obsessed pianist playing to nature’s tune.

Anyway, enough imagination for now.

Time to look for a fitting photograph for this post (although by the time you read this, you’d have already seen it!) I love playing with time at times…

26 responses to “Dance of the Pianist”

  1. prenin avatar

    Lovely piece Tom and it scans perfectly – VERY well done!!! 🙂

    Given we’ve had a night of thunderstorms and rain it is particularly appropriate!!! 🙂

    God Bless – I’m off to bed as soon as I’ve done my email and checked Facebook!!! 🙂

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I slept through everything, Prenin. Well away, I was!
      And thank you once again… have a good sleep yourself!

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      1. prenin avatar

        I managed three hours. 😦

        God knows what time I’ll get to sleep tonight… 😦

        God Bless! 🙂

        Prenin.

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        1. Tom Merriman avatar

          Better than none, though. I always think sleep balances itself out over time anyway. Not that I’m a sleep expert, or anything… I just do it every now and then!!!

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  2. Visionkeeper avatar

    Nothing like the magical sound of rain…Best sleep aid on the market! Now the thunder is a different story…That can be a hair raiser…Love the visuals you provider TL…I’m sure there is plenty of dancing at the mansion! Happy weekend…. VK

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      That said, VK, we had a ferocious thunder storm here last night, and I slept through it! Must’ve needed the sleep!

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  3. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    There a comfort to the sound of rain, but not a crashing thunderstorm. Let your imagination take you where it will, Tom. I heard your wondrous orchestra from here! 🙂

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I like thunder in small doses, Tess, but I’m a little odd anyway!
      Hope the orchestra didn’t wake you or anything!

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      1. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

        I was up anyway but soon toddled off to bed, after tripping over the cat. 😀

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        1. Tom Merriman avatar

          Oops! They tend to do things like that deliberately I find, Tess… cats. In an affectionate way, of course…

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          1. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

            Well, it WAS dark…

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            1. Tom Merriman avatar

              THAT’S when they do it deliberately, Tess!

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  4. jenniferkmarsh avatar
    jenniferkmarsh

    Goodness, this is gorgeous. I absolutely love it. Being both a pianist and an ardent lover of nature, I can connect very well (: Very apt, too, given the mighty electrical/thunder storms people have been having in the UK over the past few days! Haven’t had any in my neck of the woods, though.

    Beautiful words, Tom! Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I’m pleased that you enjoyed this, Jennifer!
      Hope your storms stay away!

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  5. Jo Bryant avatar

    thee are so many levels to find in this piece Tom…one of your best I feel

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks for saying so, Jo.

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  6. lameadventures avatar

    You do give good verse, Tom. We had some fierce thunderstorms over here on my side of the pond, too, recently. This poem captured exactly what it was like!

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Hope the storms are brief as they are dramatic, LA.

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  7. Diane Henders avatar

    This was lovely! Thank you, Tom! 🙂

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  8. europasicewolf avatar

    that was so cool! Rain and thunder storms do have their own unique music…it harmonises like an orchestra who’s conductor we cannot see…Lovely thought … a pianist playing through it all… I could hear the rain and feel the freshness of the rain drops … and the sunlight…and the rumbles of thunder….as I was reading this…the sign of a seriously quality post 🙂

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I’m pleased you think so, Icewolf. I’m happier with this version than I was the first one!

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  10. ladysighs avatar

    I played piano …. at one time. Never danced. Just plodded along. 😦

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    1. Tom avatar

      I’m not at all musically minded, Ladysighs, so I do a lot of plodding. Plodding’s good! 🙂

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      1. ladysighs avatar

        Try Plunking and Plodding

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