The birth of the phoenix


What once was coal
Sparks
Fail to
Ignite
Smoking cinders
Roll
As 
A bird
Takes
To flight
Flames
No longer lick
Embers glow no more
Two strong legs kick
And wings help the bird soar
Darkness diminished by wings
Outstretched wide
The birth of the phoenix
Has just been described
High up above flies the magical bird
Once only ever dreamed of in our real world

15 responses to “The birth of the phoenix”

  1. nrhatch avatar

    I’d love to see a Phoenix rising from the ashes . . . oh, wait, I just did. 😀

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      I love that I’ve ‘fired’ your imagination, Nancy! 😉

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  2. prenin avatar

    Very good Tom. Pity we can’t rise from our ashes – but then maybe we do? 🙂

    I believed in reincarnation, but who wants to come back as a tin of condensed milk???

    Probably said this before, but it’s still worth a chuckle! 🙂

    God Bless my friend and be warm! 🙂

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      You always make me laugh when you mention the condensed milk, Prenin!
      I think we do, by the way. Rise from the ashes, that is!

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  4. Visionkeeper avatar

    Indeed we do rise and are rising at this very moment in time! The whole shift of humanity is none other than the Phoenix in flight. There is nothing we cannot do, so if we wish to rise we do…Time to remember how powerful we really are, not the weak ones we have been told we are forever. It is now that we must remember who we really are…..Good one T……VK

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, VK.
      Time to tap into our own power within, and soar! 🙂

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  5. Androgoth avatar
    Androgoth

    I like this one Tom
    and not just your fine
    words, the imagery
    on this one rocks too 🙂

    Have a fun rest of evening
    and a superb week ahead 🙂

    Androgoth

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thank you, Andro, and I hope that your week is good as well!
      I’m pleased you liked this post… I was debating whether to ‘design’ my own phoenix, but went just for the wings instead and carried the fiery colours through the text.

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  6. europasicewolf avatar

    That was soooooooo cool! The text effects are great too…very fiery 🙂 Something very magical and inspiring about the Phoenix…wish it was real!

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Icewolf, glad you liked it!
      They may be real, you never know… remember the old saying ‘there’s no smoke without fire’… just think! 😉
      No, I think they are magical creatures too, real or legendary!

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        You know what Aquatom? I think if we both believe hard enough that in the way of mythical and magical creatures they will become real if they aren’t already!

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        1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

          They are, Icewolf, they are real.

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  7. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

    Tom you have surpassed yourself..
    Very creative and eye-catching as well as being a great poem.. I hope you keep flying Tom as you rise ever higher like the phoenix … Sue

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Sue… I shall continue to try to fly higher! 😉

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