Jordan Grainger looked over to the passenger seat in the Sambabus, realising it was empty; he looked through the driver side mirror and saw the Pincham Mob getting into another vehicle behind which had Ellova Palava at the wheel.
The second car sped passed at swift speeds, and Jordan realised Ellova was escaping with the Pinchams and the money from the bank vault – seconds before a police car with lights flashing and sirens wailing hurtled around the corner at the top of the High Street.
Not wanting to be caught himself, Jordan started the Sambabus and tried to drive away, only for the vehicle to seem to bounce along slowly and quite jarringly; he stopped again, got out expecting to see a flat tyre and saw the unbelievable sight of square wheels – all four wheels were square.
Jordan looked back up the road and could see the police quickly, yet slowly, still approaching, but still some way in the distance. He started the Sambabus again, and managed to get the car as far as the next turning without being stopped by the police, where he turned left; the road disappeared in front and he found himself plunging into deep, dark and freezing cold water.
He grabbed his mobile phone, and called the Elixir Spa Resort Hotel and Leisure Complex, to be answered by Bubblegum who merely said “I’ll be right as rain tomorrow”; Jordan woke suddenly in his bed, drenched in sweat and with a really strange feeling – the memory of the nightmare gone, but the feelings from it remained very strong.

It’s Sunday once again, which means another word has been revealed for Denise’s Six Sentence Stories challenge. Which means I have another part to post in my ongoing story featuring The Co-ordination of Supervillains.
The prompt word this week is ‘vault’, and I’ve dipped into my vault of available images to create an imaginary (and very rough, basically (the Dropped Apostrophe would be proud!)) opening sequence, should this series ever be made into a TV series. The video should be at the top of this post (if I haven’t caused YouTube to blow up in the video’s creation – although if I had done that, I’d place the blame firmly at the hands of this group of supervillains. The music in the video has also been created by yours truly also (not that I’m the slightest bit musical), so all in all I’ve been a tad creative today.
Speaking of being creative, the image below links to Denise’s site, where you can find more details on how Six Sentence Stories works.
And, if you need to read (or re-read – remember, soon to be a TV series!) previous parts of this story, look in my Storylines menu.


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