The choppy sea and pea soup mist
Give this place one of the weirdest vibes
But the turbulent waves
That cause the boat to dip and dive
And plant themselves on deck
Makes one live in the moment
Now is the time to act
Regardless of bloody hands and nose
From broken spokes and shattered glass
Crash after crash spell one thing out
It’s do or die and that is that


Posted by Tom Merriman

A future writer living in the present day

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  1. Brilliant use of the words. Really enjoyed your take on this

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    1. Thanks, Sarah… it was ‘choppy’ that led me this time! πŸ™‚

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  2. That is indeed that – well said!

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    1. Thanks, Jae, there is no other way! πŸ˜€

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  3. Aw love this one Tom. It has a beat and an almost rhyming feeling about it.
    Well done, you clever chap!
    ~ Cobs. x

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    1. Thanks again, Cobs.
      I just put the words together! πŸ™‚

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  4. Wonderful use of the words in this prompt, Tom.

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    1. Thanks, Sara. the words helped me a little here!

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  5. Good one Tom – made me remember being seasick!!! πŸ™‚

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Ah – good that it invoked a memory, Prenin, although no so good about the memory…!

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