The Room


Wind howled through the broken window, caused by the branch of the large oak during the great storm.

I was surrounded by an eerie darkness; the only light coming into the room was from the candlelight in the corridor outside the partly open door.

Trying to keep as quiet as I could, I waited. I heard footsteps in the hallway coming closer to the room.

I held my breath.

The door swiftly opened and bright torchlight shone into the room, straight through me. I waited for them to leave again before I rattled my chains.

That always makes them scream!

18 responses to “The Room”

  1. Deb avatar

    Well that would probably make me scream too! 🙂
    Just like you I’ve been trying to catch up. I think I’m just going to do like you and just comment on my friends most recent posts till something else it life get me behind again…then I’ll just do the same thing.
    Hugs, my friend! xo

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      I think I’m just about caught up now, Deb, but no doubt I’ll get behind again… such is part of the fun of blogging, I suppose, when we follow so many great blogs! 🙂

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  2. prenin avatar

    Boo! LoL!!! 🙂

    Good short story Tom – it’s funny!!! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      😯 😀
      Thanks, Prenin!

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  3. Diane Henders avatar

    Ooh, I love it! What a fabulous twist! Short but brilliant. 🙂

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  4. europasicewolf avatar

    How very wicked of you! Caught Icewolf right out on that one!

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Sorry about that, Icewolf… I like a little twist every now and then! 😉

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        A twist in the TAIL? 😉 Ouch!!! 🙂

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  5. kateshrewsday avatar

    That end got me, Tom!

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      That was as I hoped, Kate! 😀

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  6. Red avatar

    Excellent story! I love the image of a ghost holding its breath. Priceless.
    Red.

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  7. The Wanderlust Gene avatar

    Like that one. It had real suspense, keeping us guessing till the end. 🙂

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thank you for saying so! 😀

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Shree! 😀

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