One Minute Ramble: Within


Within me, there is life
Within the life, there is light
Within the light, there is warmth
Within the warmth, there is calm
Within the calm, there is space
Within the space, there is time
Within the time, there is hope
Within the hope, there is peace
Within the peace, there is me
And within the me, there is…

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23 responses to “One Minute Ramble: Within”

  1. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    May peace stay with you.

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  2. Diane Henders avatar

    Absolutely love this! 🙂

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Diane… glad you do! 😀

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  3. kateshrewsday avatar

    Lovely. Wish I felt like that.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Kate. Everything starts within… 😉

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  4. Alannah Murphy avatar

    I cannot tell you how much I like that, and how nice your blog looks, so colourful, lovely!

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thank you Alannah. I do enjoy playing with the themes!

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  5. prenin avatar

    Love it! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Prenin! 🙂

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  6. Andra Watkins avatar

    Tom, I always love how beautiful you make your words.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thank you, Andra. The idea for the heart was actually an after-thought…

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  7. lameadventures avatar

    Yes, Tom, that’s a very lovely ramble, and I’m glad you concluded with the elipses and didn’t muck it up at the end by adding “fish and chips” as the final three words.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, LA, but you’re actually right as well… there was fish and chips within me when I wrote that! Uncanny! 😉

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      1. lameadventures avatar

        My powers of perception even amaze me right now Tom.

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        1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

          Your powers are a gift!

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          1. lameadventures avatar

            Awwwwwwwwwww, you bring them to the surface Tom like cream and other floaty things that will remain unmentioned on your polite site.

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            1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

              🙂 I misread polite site for police state which completely altered the context of your comment, LA. I’ve got the correct version now however! Remember – use your powers wisely! 😉

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              1. lameadventures avatar

                “Police state”! Love it!

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  9. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

    That was very profound Tom.. excellent short poem with a whole lot of meaning.. Sue x

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