Blazing Sun


Blazing sun and long hot days
Make me see things in a haze
With weight to lose and breath to catch
Health’s important, and that’s a fact!

I have clothes that fit but more that don’t
Yet a healthy body is what I want
My clothes will fit again one day
But only if I have my way

Lose the weight and tone up good
Eat more healthy, I know I should
And once I say this task is done
Come back, you gorgeous blazing sun!

17 responses to “Blazing Sun”

  1. shreejacob avatar

    Wow..you sort of took the words right out of my mind with this , but of course made it look a lot better! Nice job!
    Though at this moment I feel like taking a nice thick fluffy cloud blankie and covering up the sun..hehe

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      I think we’ve got that nice thick blankie covering our sun at present, Shree… but it’s rather wet and is dripping profusely across the country… it’s either too hot or too wet. Hey ho!

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  2. Soma Mukherjee avatar

    oh if sun listens to me and waits for me to loose weight i will never see summer again lol

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Of course you will, Soma!
      I think the sun has been listening to me though!

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  3. Jo Bryant avatar

    Nah uh…no way a Superhero need to lose weight.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Ah, but Jo… the secret identity…

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      1. Jo Bryant avatar

        Ohhhhh…like the glasses I suppose. Does the weight slip off as easy ??
        😉
        😉

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        1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

          It more like ‘sucks in’ than ‘slips off’, but the look’s similar…
          It’s a good disguise though, Jo! 😀

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          1. Jo Bryant avatar

            I bet…superheroes only have GOOD disguises.
            😉

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  4. prenin avatar

    Ooh my diet! 🙂

    I took a week off my diet and put on two Kilos!!! 😦

    Lovely poem my friend and oh so true!!! 🙂

    God bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Prenin.
      I think I put on two kilos when I was on a diet a couple of weeks ago… not exactly the effect I was going for…

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  5. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

    Yes where is the SUN??? Although Sunday was a better day..

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      It was, Sue, you’re right. But we’re back to normal now… 😦

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  6. Androgoth avatar
    Androgoth

    Great poem Sir Aquatom,
    yes I could do to lose about
    ten pounds or so, I am at
    this very moment supposed to
    be trying to… For myself I
    mean so no pressure, but
    can I get started on it you
    may ask, and the answer is
    Noooooooooooo 😦 lmao

    Maybe I will start again on
    the morrow? 😉 🙂 lol

    Androgoth

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      I’m replying through the notifications thingy at the moment Andro, so I hope I’m not wasting my time – I can’t check to see if the comments are saving you see!
      Starting tomorrow is always an option, but sometimes it is better to just do it. Easier said than done, I know!

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  7. prenin avatar

    Hi Tom! 🙂

    I deleted my cookies, cache and browsing data from the beginning of time and got everything back!!! 🙂

    Thanks to Debbie’s suggestions!!! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      I’ve tried that already, and it works for a while and fails again, Prenin.
      But, I’ll have another go.
      I’ve been persevering for so long now it won’t hurt!
      I’ve replied to this comment through the comments on my blog… sometimes I can get in, other times I can’t.
      Well, cache deleting here I come… 😯

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