When I’m asleep I know I’m sublime
When I’m awake I like to pass the time
When I read I look for knowledge and words
When at work I speak with geeks and nerds
When driving I listen to empowering tunes
When I write I describe thoughts and moons
When I’m happy, all things are good
When I’m quiet, I’m not in a mood
When I’m eating, my belly gets full
When I’m dreaming, things are never dull
When I’m confused, my mind splits in two
When I’m creating, I create something new
When I’m being me, I’m living my way
And it’s life that always gives me something to say
When I’m… updated
26 responses to “When I’m… updated”
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I love this poem you wrote about you, Tom! Good job!!
Love and Hugs, xxLikeLike
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Thanks, Deb! 😀
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love this tom and so true life always gives us something to say i bet some blokes wish they had quiet wives lol xjen
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Quite possibly! 😀
Thanks, Jen.LikeLike
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How wickedly offered my great friend
and as your poetry slips off your tongue
there are a hundred naked nymphs
gently smacking your… I like this one
a lot as it adds a welcoming edge to an
already exciting Space 🙂Have a very nice rest of weekend Sir Aquatom 🙂
Androgoth
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Thanks, Andro! 🙂
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I’ve been writing on researched material. It’s refreshing and lovely to read meaningful poetry. My favorite line – when I write I describe thoughts and moons. I want to write thoughts and moons soon.:)
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Hi Brenna – and thank you!
I wrote this last March, but changed a few of the lines slightly, although I kept the thoughts and moons line as it was. It quite probably makes a little more sense now than it originally did, but where my mind is concerned everything is a little mixed up… 🙂LikeLike
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I love how your poetry’s pentameter always flows, Tom, and how it is visually appealing.
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Thanks, Andra! I enjoy playing with colour every now and then! 🙂
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Nice one Tom!!! 🙂
You certainly have a good touch when it comes to poetry! 🙂
God Bless!
Prenin.
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Thanks, Prenin. I just like trying to write differently from time to time! 🙂
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always love your poems Tom and you make them seem so effortless..
a gift! and I love the way in which you add your text in shades… great touch.. ~Sue xxLikeLike
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Thanks, Sue.
The last time I posted this, it looked a little plain, so I decided to jazz it up a little! 😀LikeLike
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is 1968 the year of your birth? Just wondering.
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It is!
Well, this time around, anyway, Pseu! 🙂LikeLike
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So positive, Tom. I do love this.
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Thanks, Kate. 🙂
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Loved it!
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Thank you too, Susan! 🙂
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hi aqua just called to see if you had written another blog have a good week xxjen not that im pushing you lol
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Hi Jen… no, I’ve not written a new one as yet. I have, however, just added another repost (although I have a niggle that I may have reposted it already, but never mind!)
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Wonderful poem from you Tom:)
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Thanks, Nikki! 🙂
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good to be you!!! pleased and full of hope, yep good to be you!!!
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Good indeed, R! 😀
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