The Unicorn Challenge: Still Life


The day was quiet.

Early morning: quiet.

Midday rush: quiet.

Afternoon lull: well, considering it felt as though it took a week to get to the midday rush, the afternoon lull was beyond quiet.

The only people in the marketplace were the traders. Some sat literally twiddling their thumbs waiting for a customer. When the door to the hall opened all heads pivoted, looking to see who walked through. Heads pivoted three times throughout the day.

At one point, life in the market was so still, the scene looked like a realistic painting. Light streamed in through the windows around the top of the hall, casting shadows from their frames criss-crossing the floor and stall canopies with diamond-shaped sections of light and dark. Stallholders bathed in light looking majestically frozen, those in shade grimly dull.

The fruit stall, bathed in light, reflected a million tiny windows on each cherry. Each cherry depicting the slow passing of time with pinpoint accuracy. Yet, although time stood still in each of those moments, a snail raced into the scene, stealing the moment with an understated thunder.

And then, as soon as it had arrived, it was gone.

Nobody appreciated the moment. They were too busy clock-watching to pay attention to the finer details.

Soon, figuratively, the day was done. The busyness or lack there of interfering with the power of the moment.

But, that said, it’s still life.

©️ Ayr / Gray


The Unicorn Challenge is a weekly challenge from Jenne Gray and C E Ayr, where they provide a photo and we write up to 250 words. It’s fun. It’s magical!

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20 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Still Life”

  1. joylennick avatar

    An evocative poem to be sure…Our middle son is a stall-holder and sells books and cards. We live in Spain and it is VERY hot and humid at present, so that sums up some of his days, and he didn’t have to write a word! Thank you.

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    1. Tom avatar

      A pleasure to be of help, Joy! 🙂

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  2. jenne49 avatar

    What creative use of words, Tom. And a beautiful picture you paint with them, moving as slowly as the time itself…where even a snail seems to rush. A thoughtful ‘still life’.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne.
      Yes, I felt a very slow pace was needed this time.

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  3. ladysighs avatar

    No matter what you do or where you do it, fast or slow life is still the same.

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    1. Tom avatar

      It is that, Ladysighs. The different speeds supply a bit of edge! 😊

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  4. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Still life, indeed! A lovely play on words, Tom and a story full of imagery. Well done!

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    1. Tom avatar

      😊 Thanks, Nancy. All from a snail! 🤣

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  5. Diane Henders avatar

    Ha! Love the snail racing onto the scene! 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      Hehehe! I needed to speed up the pace a little! 🤣

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  6. ceayr avatar

    Laughing here, Tom.
    Reminded me of intro to 10CC’s ‘The Dean and I’.
    Going for a lie down now to get over the excitement!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Don’t blame you, CE… sometimes, that’s just what we have to do! 😁

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  7. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    So, so slow. I’ve never been startled by a spider before!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Never, Keith?
      🕷 Boo! 🤣

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  8. Chris Hall avatar

    How delightful! 🍒

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    1. Tom avatar

      A bit of a relaxed moment, Chris! 🙂

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  9. europasicewolf avatar

    Oh! You’ve been visiting here Tom! Don’t know what’s going on here but the town is getting quieter and emptier almost by the day….no wonder the shops are closing down everywhere 🤔 Soon there will be abandoned empty shopping 🛍 centres here and only the snails 🐌 will be wandering through!
    Those cherries 🍒 have a look…it’s none too friendly! I am certain they all have eyes and are in fact little fat red aliens! 👽 😎 😏

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    1. Tom avatar

      😳 Alien cherries 🍒 and wandering snails. Not something you’d expect to see in a sentence on a general normal Sunday.

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        🤣Since when has there ever been a normal Sunday in Tom world?!!😂

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        1. Tom avatar

          Valid point, that! 🙂

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