The Unicorn Challenge: The Maze


After three hours and forty-seven minutes, fifty-eight seconds, not forgetting the seconds, in seering heat, with not so much of a drink between us, we reached the centre of the maze; open space at last after corridor after corridor of leaf-lined runs that mostly led to nowhere. At one point, we seemed to walk up and down up and down up and down identical-looking pathways, only to reach another dead end only to have to go back down and up down and up down and up to be able to try another way.

They said once we reached the centre, the mouse would clearly face the way out.

And, true to their word, the mouse statue stood proudly, looking out towards the way out, out… to…

The way out.

The way out was the way we’d just emerged; I had to sit and pound the floor rhythmically.

Three hours, forty-seven minutes, and fifty-eight seconds dashed through my mind in a split second.

Reaching the centre of the maze was only half of the journey, and we had to get out the same way in which we’d come.

I stood and followed the group leader through the ‘exit’, down and up and left and right, deeper into the perpetual oblivion of greenery.

Next time, when I’m group leader, I’ll show them how to do it properly. As cats, we aren’t meant to stay together in groups anyway.


The Unicorn Challenge, from Jenne Gray and C E Ayr, to write up to 250 words on a given image. My mews was slightly off with this one!

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8 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: The Maze”

  1. jenne49 avatar

    Ha, I wasn’t expecting the ending! Nice one, Tom
    It’s actually one of the fears that haunt me, to be stuck in a maze. I would not willingly enter one, so the cat has my full sympathy.
    PS I like what you did with the ‘mews’!

    (Tom, could you repost your story on the 05/05/23 Unicorn Challenge page? This is my story page and others won’t get the nenfit of your ‘mews’ here. I admit, it’s a bit confusing. Cheers, Jenne)

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne! I wasn’t sure this would work the way I’d intended, hence my ‘mews’ comment! 🤣
      I’ll sort out the link to the correct post later today – sorry about that! One of the hazards of rush-blogging! I’ve just run out of time for now… 🙄🙂

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      1. jenne49 avatar

        Fear not, Tom, I’ve put a link to your story on the prompt page.
        And chil…

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        1. Tom avatar

          Ah, many thanks for doing this, Jenne. 🙂

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  2. ceayr avatar

    I like confused cats.
    I thought the sly wee things could find their way in and out of anywhere, so I’m delighted they got lost!

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    1. Tom avatar

      And even more so in these tales for Blogland, CE! Everything likes to confuse us! Well, me! 😄

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  3. Diane Henders avatar

    Ha! Good one, Tom! Thanks for the chuckles.

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    1. Tom avatar

      My pleasure, Diane! 🙂

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