Future Reflections


I awoke, bookmark on my chest, book with pages splayed beside me; the lamplight brighter than the remaining daylight outside, indicating I’d slept for a good couple of hours.

The rain pelted the window, reminding me of the waterfall in the dream; well, the sound of the waterfall as it met the crystal clear reflective pool beneath it… I watched my reflection dance through each ripple as the gentle tides lapped the edge.

Each bob constantly morphing my reflection, changing my expression slightly – one time happy, another confused… perplexed… empty… angry… neutral… calm.

As I peered deeper into the reflection, through my eyes which remained open regardless of whatever shape my face morphed into, I could see different images; thoughts; times; people.

Previous and future lives played out between the ripples – memories of this lifetime, faded and distant, yet possible futures oddly crystal clear for a second or two, then just a swirl of mirrored confusion.

I flick through the book to find the page where I last remember reading, mark the page and close it – the future may well be a mess of swirly confusion, but it’s my future, and it starts right now – and as always, nothing is as it seems.


Posted for Six Sentence Stories, the theme this week is β€˜Bookmark’.

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16 responses to “Future Reflections”

  1. Spira avatar

    Tom, Tom…the coffee add-ons worked! lol

    Seriously, this is one beautiful!! meditation in six sentences.
    As always indeed…there is more to any story.

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    1. Tom avatar

      I think I may have missed the coffee, Nick… I’ve been… elsewhere! Pleased you like the Six. πŸ™‚

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  2. Hauntingcomforts avatar

    Wow, I didn’t even realize it was only 6 sentences. Together, they pack a powerful punch.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, HC!
      I just wanted a quick dip into the positive dreamworld with this one, looking at how we can shape our own futures! πŸ™‚

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  3. jenne49 avatar

    Great dream sequence, Tom – thoughtful and poetic. It made me think back to one of the haiku below Spira’s story: spectres of the past do not govern the future β€˜less we grant consent On you go then, off into the future you will make and ‘where nothing is as it seems’. Great story.

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    1. Tom avatar

      πŸ˜ƒ Thanks, Jenne! Here’s to our futures! πŸ™‚

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  4. Frank Hubeny avatar

    At least you didn’t lose your place in the book.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Haha! True, Frank… not this time, anyway! πŸ™‚

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  5. Susan St.Pierre avatar

    Fascinating and a tad creepy. A great combo!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Hehehe! Thanks, Susan. Creepy in a good way, I hope! πŸ™‚

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      1. Susan St.Pierre avatar

        😁 for sure.

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        1. Tom avatar

          πŸ™‚

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  6. clark avatar

    Excellent job portraying the loosened bounds of reality in those moments between dreams and ‘damn I better do a good job with this class/job/relationship’.

    (liked the little frill of “…lamplight brighter than the remaining daylight outside” Nice!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thank you, Clark. Yes, that was added to set a more relaxed tone! πŸ˜„

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  7. GirlieOnTheEdge avatar

    Enjoyable foray into the world of the not quite in-between, Tom.
    I too really liked the opening sentence. A not unfamiliar experience to fall asleep while reading and wake to realize dreams and hours later you’d fallen asleep. It is the perfect opportunity to “explore”.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Isn’t it just, Denise…? And when so relaxed, the mind is open to all sorts of places to explore.

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