One Minute Ramble: Rust

Creaking, flaky, eroded and weathered;
Are terms I thought wouldn’t describe me, ever
Although creaking maybe… more likely flaky…
~~Hardly~~ ~~partly~~ somewhat eroded…
And slightly weathered, maybe…
But not me.
Now.
Not me, now.

I’ve just compared myself to rust
And in the same breath didn’t.

Just…

Feb 21, 2016

Abilities, Confusion, Feel GOOD!, Rhyme, Time

10 responses to “One Minute Ramble: Rust”

Inside the Mind of Isadora

Feb 22, 2016

Copper artwork is still part of my business … love the rusted patina of it. I do hope my bones rust in that type of way. But much, much later. 😉

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Feb 22, 2016
  
  Oh, most definitely much later…
  
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  1. Inside the Mind of Isadora
    
    Feb 22, 2016
    
    ~~~ : – )
    
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Dale

Feb 23, 2016

I wish I could write like this…

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Feb 28, 2016
  
  Oh, you can, Dale!
  I just put words together.
  
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  1. Dale
    
    Feb 28, 2016
    
    Aww thanks, Tom. But you put them together so well!
    
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    1. Tom Merriman
      
      Feb 28, 2016
      
      Well, I try… 🙂
      
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      1. Dale
        
        Feb 28, 2016
        
        You do it well!
        
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Beth Younker

Feb 25, 2016

Lovely, lovely, the poetry. There is power in the verse, or in the ‘verse as my hero Captain Reynolds says. Funny how I read this after I wrote something about not being old, even though you actually beat me to it.

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Feb 28, 2016
  
  That happens to me quite a lot, Beth… I write something, and then find that someone else in my blogging circle have written about the same thing! I love coincidences.
  
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