Pianist and the rain


As the pianist played, the rain fell.
As the rain fell, the thunder sang.

As the thunder sang, the lightning danced.
As the lightning danced, the pianist played.

Thunder and music.

Lightning and rain.

Harmonious. Togetherness. Nature and sound.
Dancing. And playing. Music abounds.

In tune.

In rhythm.

Inside and out.

The pianist plays as the rains come down.

Thunder. Now birdsong. Raindrops galore.
Both nature and musician need to give more.

14 responses to “Pianist and the rain”

  1. Deb avatar

    That is lovely, Tom!
    Yes….more. 🙂
    Hugs ♥

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Deb. I actually intended for there to be a little more with this, but the words didn’t seem right, or didn’t fit together… so I left it where it was!

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  2. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    VERY nice. I like it. I find this poem delightful!

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks for saying so, Tess. I’m pleased you like it! 😀

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  3. prenin avatar

    Good poem my friend!!! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Prenin! 😀

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  4. jennygoth666 avatar

    and as the thunder n lightning raged jen sat crying in the cupboard lol great poem mr tom xjen

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Aw thanks, Jen… didn’t mean to put you off with the thunder and lightning!

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  5. Androgoth avatar
    Androgoth

    You always manage to come up with
    something a little different Sir Aquatom 🙂
    Experimentation with words is almost
    as exciting as…

    Well maybe not 🙂 lol

    Have a ghoulish evening now 🙂

    Androgoth

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      😀 I always try to do something different, some work, some don’t, but I think it’s fun just doing it Andro!

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  6. Jo Bryant avatar

    such a great flow to it…right from the first line…love this one Tom

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Jo. Pleased you liked it!

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  7. europasicewolf avatar

    Great work, love the way it flows and thunders in the rhythm of dance and rain to the song of the music embracing it….”Calling the song of the moonwolves on a frozen world of ice….” I can kinda relate to this…it captures the imagination on many different levels causing it to wander the paths of icy alien wolf dreams…your use of font colours creates an intriguing backdrop of cloudscapes such as you see on occasion when the light in these conditions takes on a strange unearthly hue 🙂

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    1. Tom (Aquatom1968) avatar

      Thanks, Icewolf, I’m pleased you like this one.

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