The Unicorn Challenge: Lawman


1652.

The country is getting back to normal after nine years of civil war, not that the residents of Lumdy noticed anything different. Suffering from their self-imposed exclusion from the rest of the region due to their mini Plague outbreak, most of the villagers were gaunt, withdrawn and lawless.

They thought nothing of helping themselves to goods intended for their market stalls, meaning other villagers often went without.

Penryn Tarbuckle had had enough.

He’d found a discarded pistol just before the Plague hit the village, and decided to use it as a deterrent. It had no ammunition so he thought just pointing it towards his fellow villagers would be enough.

One morning, Penryn walked to market, wearing his cape coat and capotain, and found all that was left was a ledger and a royal orb. The stall keeper had no idea where either had come from, and, as the rest of his items had already been taken by other desperate villagers, didn’t charge Penryn the shilling he should have done.

On his way back to his cottage, Penryn noticed other villagers scuttling out of his way as he approached them. With the last one, he had to ask, ‘you, squire, stop… why doth run?’

The ‘squire’ pointed to the pistol in Penryn’s hand, without uttering a word before he continued to scuttle.

‘It works!’ Penryn chuckled, realising he didn’t even need to point the pistol.

He walked home, imagining himself as a bronze statue… in years to come.

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge to write up to 250 words using a photo provided by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr as inspiration. 

23 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Lawman”

  1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    A mini-plague. Is that like being a little pregnant?
    Fun, exciting story, Tom. Thanks for a treat this morning!

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    1. Tom avatar

      ‘A little pregnant’ 🤣
      No, I meant they’d had a mini outbreak of it in the village! 🤣😂
      My pleasure, Nancy. I’m stoked you enjoyed it! 🙂

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  2. jenne49 avatar

    You’ve made me smile, Tom.
    What a good story, working in all the elements of the prompt photo.
    And the names… You should run workshops on name-creation for stories!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne… pleased I gave you a smile! 😀
      As for the names… well, the characters name themselves as they begin to appear!

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  3. ceayr avatar

    A strangely entertaining – or do I mean entertainingly strange – piece, Tom.
    Either way, it was strange but entertaining!

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    1. Tom avatar

      As long as it’s a mixture of both, CE, I’m happy. Mind you, I’d also be happy if it was either of the two options! 🤣

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  4. Chris Hall avatar

    Good story, Tom.
    For some reason I thought this guy had been to the Cape Town back in 1652, especially that name.

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    1. Tom avatar

      That’s an interesting thought, Chris. I totally made the names up… maybe I’d unknowingly tapped into the Cape Town history as I wrote! 🤔😊

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    2. Tom avatar

      Oh, and thanks, by the way! 😁

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  5. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    I liked the “mini Plague”. Oh, don’t worry, it’s just a bit of plague LOL! Penryn proved that walking softly and carrying a big stick – or gun – really does work.

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    1. Tom avatar

      🤣 I actually meant ‘localised outbreak’, but I like the ‘bit of plague’ viewpoint myself!
      Penryn was ahead of his time.

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  6. Sally avatar

    What a great name for your character! An added plus — I learned a new word! Capotain.

    Well done.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thank you, Sally!
      The characters seem to name themselves… and between you and me, it was a new word to me also! 🤫

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  7. clark avatar

    Dude!
    World build much?!*

    Liked the names, loved the concept of ‘mini plague’

    v cool

    and…and!¡ in less than two hunnert an fity words

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    1. Tom avatar

      Pleased you liked it, Clark. I had a pull to the 1640s years ago, so it feels easy writing about that time. The world’s already there! 🙂

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  8. Margaret avatar

    Love this. Fascinating setting and I love Penryn Tarbuckle. We need a few of his ilk wandering the planet right now I believe. Although as I write I’m thinking an unloaded pistol might not be enough to pull our world into shape.

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    1. Tom avatar

      They were simpler times back then, Margaret. Now whatever we do overcomplicates things!

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  9. europasicewolf avatar

    It’s amazing what happened back in the 1650s Tom! And a mini plague 😁 Better than a giant one I guess, though the end result may not be so different😅

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    1. Tom avatar

      I’d like to think they caught this one before it spread, Icewolf… but history tells us otherwise! 😉

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        I usually does Tom!

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      2. europasicewolf avatar

        It usually does too… 😉….Typos…who’d have thought it of Icewolf?🙄

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        1. Tom avatar

          🤣 (I didn’t spot anything! 😎)

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