The Unicorn Challenge: Wrong Direction


‘That’s OK, I’ve got you now.’

Several hours later, Maud Appletree awoke, warm, dry and in a strange room. She looked around, noticing a figure sat reading a book in the corner. The figure noticed Maud stirring, stood and walked over to the bed.

Maud recognised the face of the young woman, but couldn’t place her name. ‘Who…’ Maud asked, confused.

‘It’s me, Mrs Appletree,’ the young woman smiled, ‘Hannah Wills… from school.’

‘You?’

‘Try to relax,’ Hannah said, reassuringly, ‘your mini yacht got into difficulties… it hit a dislodged shipwreck or something… anyway, I was part of the helicopter rescue team that brought you back to land.’

‘Hannah Wills…’ Maud’s voice trailed off as she remembered her last words to her, on Hannah’s last day of school almost eight years ago: you, young lady, with your head in the clouds, will never amount to much unless you bring yourself back down to earth and focus on something constructive.

Hannah smiled again. ‘Everyone’s safe, so catch up with your sleep now.’ She left the ward room and, collecting her support dog, Icarus, from reception, walked up to the helipad on the roof of the Emergency Rescue Complex.

She remembered Mrs Appletree’s stern demeanour in the classroom, but was so glad that she hadn’t followed her last piece of ‘advice‘, and kept her head for heights.

‘Sometimes we just have a calling,’ Hannah said to Icarus, who licked his nose, as they sat on the edge overlooking the harbour.

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr. They provide a photo prompt for us to provide something, anything, up to 250 words.

27 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Wrong Direction”

  1. jenne49 avatar

    And lucky it was for Mrs Appletree that Hannah didn’t heed her advice!
    Good story, Tom.
    I have the greatest of respect for folk who do Search and Rescue.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Me too, Jenne.
      Thanks. 🙂
      These prompts take you someplace else, don’t they?

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      1. ceayr avatar

        Glad the prompts work for you, Tom.
        We try to keep them varied, and I agree that Jenne selects wisely.
        Thanks for your support.

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  2. Editor, Witcraft avatar

    A story well told and creatively using the cues in the prompt. Well done, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Doug.

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  3. Diane Henders avatar

    I love the story, Tom! Just goes to show that even the best-intended advice isn’t always right. 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      What’s right for one isn’t right for all. Thanks, Diane.

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  4. ladysighs avatar

    I like your story. I was waiting for something crazy or silly to happen. 😉 Not this time. 🙂

    The name Maud caught my attention. My grandmother’s name was Maud and I’ve never heard/read it used much. (I’m glad I wasn’t named after my grandmother. lol )

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    1. ceayr avatar

      Until I hear otherwise, you will now forever be Maud to me!

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      1. ladysighs avatar

        And you will be Mud to me!

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        1. ceayr avatar

          Tish, boom!

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          1. ladysighs avatar

            I like mud pies.

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    2. Tom avatar

      I like silly, Ladysighs, but sometimes I like non-silly, or more real. Depends on the characters, really… the name Maud appears to me quite a few times when I’m writing.
      I like the fact there’s a connection to you. Your grandmother wasn’t Maud Appletree, by any chance? 🙂

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      1. ladysighs avatar

        No, her last name was the same as my maiden name. Sometimes I’m not even able to recall that. 😉

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        1. Tom avatar

          🤣 It’s there, somewhere! 😄

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  5. ceayr avatar

    You worked in all the elements, Tom!
    Nicely done

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, CE.

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  6. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Really enjoyed your story, Tom.
    The name of the dog; very clever of you!
    Well done!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Nancy. I spotted the dog in the photo at the last minute, so had to make a quick change. His name just fell into place… 😏

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      1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

        I had a doggy in my story, too, but with a very different ending. Hahaha! 😂

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        1. Tom avatar

          Yes, I read!😄
          My mobilius phoneus lost power earlier just as I was about to comment, so you’ve just reminded me to rectify that right now!

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          1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

            Good thing I paid attention in Latin I. 😁

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            1. Tom avatar

              Ah, yes… I don’t know if you’ve noticed, but on occasion I do tend to slip into Latin! 🤣

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  7. Chris Hall avatar

    Great story, Tom.
    (especially the name of the dog)

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Chris. Icarus is a cool name! 😎 😄

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  8. Margaret avatar

    This is a lovely story, Tom. In fact it struck a chord with me on a personal level. I was a high school teacher for many years, and I’ve also had a few stints in hospital for various reasons. My big fear when I was living and teaching in a regional town was having to be nursed by an ex-student. The embarrassment of that would have brought me undone. Then it happened, but fortunately, the nurse was one of the sweetest, kindest, girls I’ve ever taught. I think Hannah in your story was the same type, luckily for Maud.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Yes, thanks, Margaret. It’s interesting how paths cross over again sometimes…

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