Precise Decoration


What are you doing voice A asked, within a distant echo; that’s not right, commented voice B, slightly ahead; leave him to it, voice C said from somewhere behind, he’s concentrating.

Tom pulled his tongue back into his mouth and carefully carried the small, silver sugared bead in a tweezer, and then carefully and precisely placed it into the centre of the round iced cake.

It’ll take him until next year to extract all the beads at this rate, voice B added, as she walked through the double swing doors that led out of the kitchen, with a swish. Tom slowly retrieved another silver bead from the small glass jar and placed it beside the first in the cake’s centre.

Voice A moved over to the stove, flicked on the flame, and began making pancakes; it’s a good thing the cake isn’t needed until next week, she giggled, at least it’ll be partly decorated.

I need to go back to the office, voice C said as he left the kitchen, let you concentrate some more… the swish of the swing door caused the third bead to flick out of the tweezer, catapult across the kitchen, and plop unseen into the sizzling pancake mix.

Posted for Six Sentence Stories. A Six Sentence Café & Bistro ‘under the microscope’ six. The prompt word this week is Extract.

22 responses to “Precise Decoration”

  1. Chris Hall avatar

    Oh dear, I hope there’s not another incident with the kitchen in the SSC&B again!🤣

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    1. Tom avatar

      😳😬 I hadn’t thought of that, Chris! 😀

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  2. europasicewolf avatar

    Ah….a new take on the flying catapulting boiled sweet!!😋😂

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    1. Tom avatar

      🤣 I know! At least here, we know where the catapulted object ended up!

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        This is the most reassuring aspect of the whole sorry affair!😅🤣😂

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  3. Reena Saxena avatar

    I’m sure the cake will cost a bomb, not bead 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      With all the work that’s gone into it, Reena, it should! 🤣

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  4. joycelansky avatar
    joycelansky

    I’d just dump the beads all at once.

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    1. Tom avatar

      It would make the job a lot easier doing it that way!

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  5. messymimi's meanderings avatar

    Take your time, the finished product will be worth it.

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    1. Tom avatar

      If a job’s worth doing, it’s worth doing well, Mimi! 🙂

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  6. clark avatar

    Oh, a wise guy?*

    Not being a food/culinary guy I say a first-of-the-week Café draft, the plot did revolve around whether you were here and/or the status of the Cafés supply of vanilla extract.

    audio from Curly (of the Three Stooges fame)

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    1. Tom avatar

      Vanilla extract, you say? Hmmm… 🤔

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  7. clark avatar

    PS loved the non-specific dialogue tags. Total challenge to you (the author) and to us the Readers.
    Coolito

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Clark. I wanted to try to touch on the total concentration with this one, where voices are just voices. I think it seemed to work.

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  8. […] The tall, thin man was just stepping towards the double swinging doors that offered access to the kitchen behind the bar, when there was a single sound and an asterix’d exclamation; the first described best as: ‘Dit—Dit—Dit‘ the second, something akin to ‘Bloody ‘ell‘. […]

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  9. GirlieOnTheEdge avatar

    Nice one, Tom. Dare say the cake is to celebrate someone’s return!
    Now to those “voices”. Thinking I know who Voice A and C are but…Voice C? 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      It could be, Denise. I was just given the task to decorate the cake!
      As for the voices, well, you’re probably right! 😁

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  10. Spira avatar

    Nice job portraying the “in the zone” concentration, Tom.
    Can Hūnga have a slice, please?

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Nick. Some moments require that extra level of concentration.

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    2. Tom avatar

      Oops… just realised I’d forgotten Hūnga’s slice. Luckily, there’s one left!

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