Mimi glided through the two swing doors from the kitchen at the end of the bar, shouting βwe arenβt open yet, Lou,β to the man in the beige trench coat who sat on one of the high stools at the bar; ββthough, how did you get in β the doors arenβt even open yet?β
On the stage, Jenne warmed her vocal chords with a deep, throaty a cappella rendition of City Lights, as Mimi joined me in the booth, holding up and then waving the small metal βreservedβ sign that I hadnβt noticed as I took my seat, and rolled her eyes.
I looked at Jenne on the stage who graciously nodded without losing her flow, and I glanced back to Mimi with a smile to hide my βoopsβ expression.
βWhat gives this place heart?β Mimi asked gesturing to the empty Bar / CafΓ© / Bistro, lit by only a few side lights and artificial candles on the walls around the room.
I thought for a moment, and then suggested βthe atmosphere… the ambience… the lighting…β and looking back at Jenne, βthe music?β
βItβs the people who give the place heart,β Mimi corrected, βwithout the people an empty place is an empty space… and a place with a heart is welcoming every time… the people provide the heart… and the soul… and the magic.β
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Another quick Six Sentence Story, this time featuring the Six Sentence CafΓ© & Bistroβ¦ the prompt word being Meter. The image above links to Deniseβs GirlieOnTheEdge site, who hosts this writing challenge.
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