Blocks ahead
But
There’s a way through
This here’s a (very bad) piku. It’s a bit like a haiku, but shorter. It’s based on the first three numbers of pi, 314. So it has eight syllables, three in line one, one in line two and four in line three.
So this is
My
First piku go
The second piku is actually worse than the first. For starters, it’s my second piku, not the first as is suggested. And as I wrote it, I had a nagging feeling that I’ve written in this form before, so as well as being awful and wrong, it could also be untrue.
However, as I said in my first piku (the first above, not the possibly untrue one) this is what could be considered a block, and I’m finding a way through it.
Interesting idea….Is this a real thing or a special TL mansion thing? Glad there’s a way through ahead Yay!
Simplify your life
and
peace will be found….
Have a happy weekend ahead TL…VK 🙂
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Thanks, VK. I think it’s real – well, it isn’t my idea, Tilly writes picus on her blog.
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Cool….I like the idea of it…Like I said in mine above, simplicity is where we find peace, so less is often better I think 🙂 Have a great weekend! VK
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Absolutely! You too, VK!
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Tom, thanks for reminding me that I have a list of these tiny forms, like piku, filed away! You did a great job, and I’ll try to crank some out during the midnight poet’s shift 🙂
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Go for it, Staarlz! 🙂
It’s fun writing, whatever (and however) it’s written! 🙂
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Indeed, writing is FUN 🙂
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I’d never heard of a piku before. I learn something new every day… 🙂
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There’s always something new to learn, Diane. It’s a wonder how we manage to find the space for it all! 😃
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I don’t know about you, but in a lot of cases I only find space for new learning by forgetting something I used to know. 😉
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That’s definitely the same with me, Diane… only I seem to forget things I’m not ready for forgetting just yet! 🙄
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A “piku”….hmm…sounds like a Pokomon character! I’m most inquisitive about where the way out leads to in this curious blocky place😀
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Freedom! It leads to that great vast openness of freedom! 😃
And I see what you mean regarding the pokemon!
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