DC’s Dawnstar: Pondering


โ€œOoh, Ryan!โ€ Mabel said sternly, giving her grandson a cup of tea as he sat on the sofa in the living room. โ€œWhatโ€™ve you done?โ€

โ€œDonโ€™t worry, son.โ€ George said, taking a sip out of his cup as he sat in his armchair. โ€œYouโ€™ve done nowt wrong.โ€

โ€œNowt wrong? Nowt wrong, George Green?โ€ Mabel fumed. โ€œIt was all your fault. If you โ€˜adnโ€™t gone knockinโ€™ on next door, Iโ€™d have been โ€˜ere when our Ryan came in and I couldโ€™ve stopped him getting to Dawn.โ€

โ€œNan, calm down. Sit down and have a drink.โ€ Ryan said, โ€œAnd have a custard cream as well.โ€

โ€œI only went to tell โ€˜im about his security light, Mabel.โ€ George said.

โ€œOh no you didnโ€™t, George. You went to phone the police. I knew what you were thinkinโ€™ when I saw you standinโ€™ at their gate.โ€

โ€œMabel, I said I wouldnโ€™t and I wouldnโ€™t. They might have a camera on the back which caught her going into the shed. I was going to see if they did.โ€

โ€œInto the shed? Nan… Grandad, whatโ€™s going on?โ€ Ryan was very confused. He took another sip of tea when a thought struck him. โ€œWait. Auntie She told me to tell you theyโ€™re looking. Are they looking for Dawn?โ€

โ€œLooking? Oh George. What are we going to do?โ€ Mabel looked down to the living room carpet for inspiration. โ€œGeorge! Do they โ€˜ave a camera? Next door?โ€

โ€œThey do, as it happens,โ€ George answered, โ€œbut itโ€™s not working. Like the lights. The whole system was damaged in that lightning strike last month, and theyโ€™ve not got round to fixing it. He says heโ€™s going to get a new one next month.โ€

โ€œDid you tell them about Dawn?โ€

โ€œTell โ€˜im about a winged alien? Mabel, heโ€™ll think Iโ€™m off me rocker. He thinks that anyway, from the way he looks at me sometimes.โ€

โ€œA winged alien?โ€ Ryan asked. โ€œAre you two OK?โ€

โ€œYou didnโ€™t see โ€˜er wings, our Ryan?โ€ Mabel asked. โ€œWhat were you lookinโ€™ at? Oh, never mind. Donโ€™t answer. I know what you young lads are like.โ€

โ€œNan!โ€ Ryan felt his cheeks burn. โ€œI wasnโ€™t. I just saw her on the bed and wondered what she were doing! I didnโ€™t have time to look to see if she had wings, or anything else for that matter. Iโ€™d only just got there and shook her when you came in. Iโ€™ll go up and have a look now.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™ll do no such thing, Ryan Green!โ€ Mabelโ€™s stern tone returned. โ€œYouโ€™ll sit there and help us work out what to do. We canโ€™t โ€˜ave anyone knockinโ€™ on our door, searchinโ€™ the place and finding Dawn.โ€

โ€œDawnโ€™s a funny name for an alien.โ€ Ryan pondered.

โ€œItโ€™s Dawnstar, Ryan.โ€ George said. โ€œYour Nanโ€™s called her Dawn.โ€

โ€œWho would be lookinโ€™ for โ€˜er?โ€ Mabel asked. โ€œI canโ€™t see the police having an alien department.โ€

โ€œMaybe thereโ€™s a space police.โ€ Ryan answered. โ€œOr maybe itโ€™s the scientists. Theyโ€™ll probably want to experiment on her.โ€

โ€œTheyโ€™ll do nothing of the sort!โ€ Mabel took another sip of tea. โ€œSheโ€™s a lovely little thing. If only she didnโ€™t โ€˜ave them wings. We could put her in some of my clothes and pass โ€˜er off as your girlfriend, our Ryan.โ€

โ€œNan, no offence, but your clothes wouldnโ€™t go on…โ€

โ€œWhatโ€™s wrong with me clothes?โ€ Mabel sounded shocked.

โ€œNothing Nan, theyโ€™re just a bit old-fashioned for someone of my age.โ€

โ€œOld-fashioned? So thatโ€™s how you see your Nan, Ryan, is it?โ€

โ€œNo, Nan, no. Your clothes look good on you, you always look nice. Itโ€™s just… Grandad, you know what I mean?โ€

โ€œDonโ€™t bring me into this, Ryan. Youโ€™ll never win.โ€

โ€œโ€™Ang on… Ryan… do you still see that girl you used to see?โ€ Mabel decided sheโ€™d made Ryan squirm enough. โ€œThe one who wanted to be a, now, what was it, a metalfillyfist? You said she went to uni to study metaliffalissally.โ€

โ€œDo you mean Kate?โ€ Ryan smiled. โ€œNot seen her for years. She moved to Devon. It was a metaphysicist she wanted to be, not what you said.โ€ He laughed. โ€œI doubt sheโ€™ll speak to me now, though.โ€

โ€œYou were as thick as thieves, you two.โ€ Mabel prompted. โ€œSheโ€™ll probably know what theyโ€™ll be looking for.โ€

โ€œI doubt sheโ€™ll have the same number.โ€ Ryan looked over at his Nan who looked back with an expectant yet pleading expression on her face. โ€œOK. Iโ€™ll try and phone her.โ€

Mabel continued to look at Ryan without speaking. George too looked over in anticipation now, also without saying a word.

โ€œNow? You want me to phone her right now?โ€ Ryan sounded a little shocked.

โ€œNo time like the present, son.โ€ George said.

โ€œGo on, Ry, for me. And fer Dawn.โ€ Mabelโ€™s voice became very soft.

Ryan reached into his jeans pocket and took out his mobile phone. He looked through the contacts, tapping the phoneโ€™s screen when he found the entry he was looking for. He looked at his Nan as he tapped the screen again. โ€œItโ€™s engaged.โ€ He said.

โ€œRyan, try again.โ€ Mabel said, losing some of her soft tones. โ€œKeep trying.โ€

He called the number again. He nodded toward Mabel and smiled. โ€œItโ€™s ringing.โ€

โ€œOh, George. I hope she can help.โ€ Mabel whispered.

โ€œShush, love. Itโ€™ll be fine.โ€ George tapped his wifeโ€™s arm.

โ€œHi. Kate?โ€ Ryan spoke into the phone. โ€œKate? How are you doinโ€™? Long time no speak.โ€ Ryan glanced over to Mabel. โ€œItโ€™s Ry. Ryan Green! Yeesss!โ€ He laughed. โ€œI know this is a bit out of the blue, but I need your help. Well, me Nan and Grandad do. This is going to sound really odd, but…โ€ Mabel rolled her right hand in an attempt to hurry Ryan along. โ€œTheyโ€™re fine. Exactly the same as when you saw them last. Yes!โ€ He laughed again, โ€œStill the same.โ€ He listened intently, his expression changing to a broad smile. โ€œOK, then. Bye!โ€

โ€œRyan! You didnโ€™t…โ€ Mabel sat back in her chair.

โ€œSheโ€™s coming round.โ€ Ryan smiled. โ€œSheโ€™s up here!โ€

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This is the seventh instalment of my fan fiction tale based on the DC Comics character Dawnstar. The first part can be found here, the second here, and the third here. The fourth part is here, and the fifth here. The sixth part is here. Dawnstar was created by Paul Levitz and Mike Grell. All other characters are of my own creation.

14 responses to “DC’s Dawnstar: Pondering”

  1. Elaine avatar

    An alien department ๐Ÿคญ is this going to turn into a love story I ask myself ๐Ÿค”

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    1. Tom avatar

      Elaine, your guess is as good as mine! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Chris Hall avatar

    Or maybe a love triangle??

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    1. Tom avatar

      Oh, I hope not, Chris. I can’t do complications! ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿคฃ

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      1. Chris Hall avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. 1sojournal avatar

    Now, you’ve just made me more curious…

    Elizabeth

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    1. Tom avatar

      I’m just as curious as you are, Elizabeth! โ˜บ

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  4. prenin avatar

    Keep it up Tom, you’re firing on all cylinders!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

    Blessed Be! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks Prenin… the characters are helping! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. paulenglishoriginal avatar

    This is getting good, Tom. Kate’s a great choice of a name for a metaphysicist.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Kate’s puzzling me at the moment, Paul, we’ll have to keep watching her. And thank you for your thoughts! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. europasicewolf avatar

    You never disappoint Tom! And your posts are always so full of unique originality and cool characters – took me right out of the bleary eyed, wet and miserable workplace morning! Maybe Dawn’s wings would help with the that bit!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Icewolf.
      Dawnstar’s a bit busy at the moment, but I’ll ask her when she’s free! ๐Ÿ˜˜

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        Yes… I should imagine she is a bit busy!

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