DC’s Dawnstar: Awakening


โ€œMabel? Whatโ€™s wrong? You sounded urgent on the phone and now you look as white as a ghost.โ€

โ€œSheila. Quick. Come in.โ€ Mabel ushered her sister into the hallway and quickly checked left and right up and down the street. She looked at the bus stop in front of the house. โ€œWere you followed? Was anybody in the bus shelter?โ€ She closed and locked the door.

โ€œEr…noโ€ Sheila replied.

โ€œGood. Now, I want you to go into the front room, and donโ€™t panic.โ€

โ€œCan I take my coat off?โ€ Sheila was starting to feel concerned.

โ€œNo time. No time. In a minute.โ€ Mabel pointed to the living room door, which was closed, and gestured Sheila to walk through it.

Gingerly, Sheila pushed open the door and stepped through. Two armchairs were the first things to see in the room, and sat in one of them was George, fast asleep. A tray sat on the other chair, with a teapot, a jug of milk and three empty cups, and a small plate of biscuits. โ€œWhatโ€™s going on? Is George alright?โ€ Sheila looked back at Mabel, who continued to gesture her into the room. Sheila stepped into the centre of the room, looking at George. โ€œIs George OK?โ€ She asked with a little more urgency.

โ€œOh, heโ€™s fine, Sheila!โ€ Mabel said, slightly exasperated. โ€œThe sofa. Look at the sofa!โ€

Sheila turned herself around and looked at the sleeping figure on the sofa, who was covered by a pale peach crocheted blanket. โ€œOh, I like that blanket, Mabel.โ€

โ€œNever mind about that now, our Sheila. Look under her head.โ€

Sheila looked at the way the young girl was propped up on the sofa. โ€œWho is she?โ€ she asked, as she looked at the pillows behind her head. โ€œThey donโ€™t look too comfortable them, May. Why have you folded them like that?โ€

โ€œLook again.โ€

Sheila noticed the feathers. โ€œYou shouldโ€™ve said, May. I couldโ€™ve brought a couple of pillows if youโ€™ve only got these old ones.โ€

โ€œOoh, Sheila. Look! Sheโ€™s an Angel. Theyโ€™re her wings!โ€

โ€œDonโ€™t be daft, Mabel. An Angel! Who is she?โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t know. I thought with you working on the reception at the police station, you mightโ€™ve heard of any missing people or anything… or heard of anything fallinโ€™ from the skies last night.โ€

โ€œFalling from the…?โ€ Sheila smiled. โ€œMabel, I donโ€™t work at the police station. I work on the reception at the plumbers across the road from the police station. I keep telling you that! Now, whatโ€™s going on? Whoโ€™s this girl, and why have you really asked me to come here at half eight all flustered?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s her! She fell through our shed roof last night. Me and George managed to get her in here and onto the settee, and she went out like a light. Sheโ€™s been like that ever since. And then heโ€ Mabel thumbed over to her husband, โ€œfell asleep there shortly afterwards. I made us all tea, but itโ€™s cold now. I can microwave it up if you want some.โ€

โ€œNo ta, Iโ€™m fine…โ€ Sheila looked again at the figure on the sofa. โ€œHowโ€™s she an Angel? Sheโ€™s just a girl.โ€

โ€œWell, them wings are stuck to her good and proper if she isnโ€™t an Angel. They wonโ€™t budge!โ€ Mabel explained. โ€œI was hoping youโ€™d have heard something about this.โ€

โ€œNo… well, I wouldnโ€™t. Youโ€™ll have to โ€“ does she need an ambulance?โ€

โ€œThere isnโ€™t a mark on โ€˜er, sheโ€™s just slept all the way through. She was groggy when we brought her in, but she walked OK.โ€

โ€œWalked?โ€ Sheila pondered. โ€œMaybe her wings are broken.โ€

โ€œBroken?!โ€ Mabel brought her right hand over her mouth, shocked. โ€œI hadnโ€™t thought of that. And here was me tryinโ€™ to pull โ€˜em off! Should I call a vet?โ€

โ€œA vet??!โ€ Sheila burst out laughing. โ€œShe isnโ€™t an animal.โ€

โ€œBut sheโ€™s part bird. They may be able to help.โ€

โ€œMabel, sheโ€™s a girl with glued on wings. Donโ€™t be daft.โ€

The girl on the sofa sat upright, and instantly starting flapping her wings ferociously, creating a strong wind in the room. She kicked the blanket to the floor, and leapt off the sofa.

โ€œOoh, โ€˜eck!โ€ Mabel shouted, as she shut the door with a slam. The winged girl knocked a couple of ornaments off the mantel with her beating wings. โ€œMe squirrels!โ€

Also panicking, Sheila picked up one of the ornamental squirrels without thinking. โ€œThey arenโ€™t broken, May.โ€ She said. โ€œWhat are they? Marble?โ€

โ€œSheila! We need to try anโ€™ calm โ€˜er down. Sheโ€™s going mad!โ€

Sheila held up both her arms, palms facing the girl. โ€œCalm down. Now calm down…โ€ she offered.

โ€œAh do rat clackโ€ The girl screamed. โ€œAH DO RAT CLACK!โ€

โ€œAh do rat clack, love!โ€ Mabel said in as soothing a voice she could muster.

โ€œWhat the bloominโ€™…โ€ the commotion woke George. โ€œMabel, get โ€˜er some bread! Quick!โ€

โ€œBread?โ€

โ€œBread Mabel! Now!โ€

โ€œGeorge Green, donโ€™t you speak to me that way! Why bread?โ€

Sheila raised and lowered her palms, hoping the girl would know she wanted to calm her and meant no harm. The girl sent another ornament crashing to the floor with her wing. โ€œOh, that oneโ€™s broke, Mabel!โ€

โ€œBread! She might be hungry.โ€ George shouted, and Mabel ran to the kitchen, returning a second later with a loaf. She handed it to George. George took out a slice and broke it into pieces, scattering it across the floor. Sheila joined Mabel inside the door.

โ€œAh do rat clack!โ€ the girl said again.

โ€œGeorge Green! She isnโ€™t a bird!โ€ Mabel argued. โ€œStop throwinโ€™ โ€˜er bread!โ€

The girl stopped flapping and sat herself cross-legged in the centre of the room.

โ€œAh do rat clack!โ€ she said once more, looking at Mabel with a pleading look across her face. She picked up a piece of bread. George motioned to his mouth, suggesting she could eat it, which she did. And another. And then another.

โ€œShe was only hungry, Mabel.โ€ George said, offering a full slice.

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This is the second instalment of my fan fiction tale based on the DC Comics character Dawnstar. The first part can be found here. Dawnstar was created by Paul Levitz and Mike Grell. All other characters are of my own creation.

16 responses to “DC’s Dawnstar: Awakening”

  1. Elaine avatar

    This is great Tom, Iโ€™m well into it, obviously loving the angel ๐Ÿ˜‡

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks again, Elaine. But is she an Angel? ๐Ÿค”

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      1. Elaine avatar

        ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

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  2. earthskyair avatar

    Wow, so engaging, so readable, draws you right in. Great dialog and characters. Anxious to see where you go with this. ๐ŸŒท

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    1. Tom avatar

      Pleased you’re enjoying it, Earthskyair! I’m looking forward to see how things turn out too! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. paulenglishoriginal avatar

    Like how you’re coming at this story from the civilians’ POV instead of Dawnstar’s, Makes for an interesting and different read.

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    1. Tom avatar

      I have a feeling we may be seeing things from Dawnstar’s perspective soon, Paul. The characters tell me what to write!

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  4. Diane Henders avatar

    Things are getting complicated! I’ll look forward to the next instalment… ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Tom avatar

      You and me both, Diane! ๐Ÿ˜„

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  5. prenin avatar

    Brilliant Tom, ya got me hooked!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

    Blessed Be! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks Prenin. Hopefully the next part will be along soon!

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  6. Chris Hall avatar

    An evolving story of great promise, Tom! Looking forward to more ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Tom avatar

      Me too, Chris… me too! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. -Eugenia avatar

    Brilliant writing, Tom! I am looking forward to what comes next.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks Eugenia. I’m in the same boat as you!

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      1. -Eugenia avatar

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