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It was meant to be a spectacle showpiece
More than a message
And not just rows of words missing a point
In a post with a gentle sense of humour fun
That needed a gentle injection of fun humour
Spin wouldn’t work
Bending the truth wouldn’t work either
And I think even invisible ink text ink
(i.e. not posting it at all)
Would wouldn’t make it more mint than it was
But alas, it is what it is
A spectacle with plenty of warts and crossings out and not a Vampyre in sight
excitedly There WAS a vampire; there WAS! … Oh, no, it was crossed out.
A highly commended effort on rather a bad-tempered and uncooperative set of words!
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Yes… they didn’t want to play, dd they, Col?
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Tom, You really are good at this craziness.
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Thanks, Beverly. This one was a little tricky (although you might not be able to tell as I cleverly disguised it!) 😉
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Clever one Tom! 🙂
Both positive and negative in one! 🙂
Glad to know I’m not the only one who has to re-edit their works until we’re satisfied with them!!! 🙂
God Bless!
Prenin.
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Thanks, Prenin… this was a tricky set of words, so I just went for it! 🙂
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Y’know … I’m not sure if it’s the weird choice of words, or that you’re weird … but this whole thing is just . . . . . well, ….. weird!
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I hope weird in a good way, Cobs, because weird in a bad way really is weird!
Weird’s a weird word when you write it may times. Weird.
Oh… and I AM weird! I’ll be the first to admit that! 😀
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