Are you ready? In the groove?
Count the chimes…
One?
None?!?!
That ain’t smooth.
Never mind… this’ll soothe
Like satin vinyl
Silky sm… you’ve
A plethora of words to choose
And yet you use
One in twos
And again. Not smooth.
The final draft of this design
Is far from fine
Draw the line
And fill the void
This ain’t a song, so don’t need no rhythm
Sponge it in, you’ll be forgiven
…in time


Posted by Tom Merriman

A future writer living in the present day

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    1. Thanks for saying so, Sara. They were tricky words, but I wanted to have fun with them!

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  1. Happy New Year Tom …….,. You have been keeping my attention having a good read Very Good Tom and a big thank you……. hugs Noelle….

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    1. Happy New Year to you too, Noelle!
      And the pleasure is all mine – you’re very welcome here! 😀

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  2. Zings along nicely.
    Just thinking — ‘A future writer …’ Tom Morrowman?

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    1. Tomorrow Man… yes, I like the sound of that, Col.
      I shall bear it in mind when I reinvent myself (again!) 😀
      And thank you, by the way!

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      1. Nonono. It MUST be Tom Morrowman! 🙂

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        1. Ah yes… that was what I meant! 😀

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  3. Good piece Tom! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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