Hell, Help or Hello.


The moment I moved in I could tell there was something different about the house.

I’d hear doors open or close from the other end of the house when there was only me there, or floorboards would creak in the rooms above. That was particularly unsettling when I was up in the loft.

Water could be heard trickling in a room that had been converted many years earlier into a storeroom, even though all pipes had been removed when the bathroom was moved to the front of the house.

Pictures, paintings and photos would appear in different places – in different rooms – on different walls.

Laughter echoed along the hallway shortly after an eerie hand bell rang by unseen hands, only for both the ringing and the laughter to fade away into the distance.

Figures moved when I glanced them in the corner of my eye – shadows appeared in places completely wrong according to the light – taps would be heard on windows, even on the first and second floors.

A drawer never remained closed. It was always open when I looked at it. I’d close it, look minutes later and it would be open again. Always the same.

The drawer is lined by a copy of an old newspaper, the headline reporting a tale of a local schoolteacher who had fled after visiting this house, and she had never been seen again.

I don’t think she fled.

I think she’s still here, and is out in the gardens somewhere.

I think she’s trapped, and is telling me that she’s here, but just can’t do it strongly enough.

Her face is on the front page of the newspaper.

Her face is the same one that I see in the patterns in tea leaves occasionally, or out in the gardens, in the flowerbeds, between the flowers. And sometimes, when I see my reflection in the mirror. As clear as day my face becomes hers… only, it isn’t hers.

Again, there’s a difference.

Sometimes, she manages to speak. She’ll manage ‘Hel…’ before abruptly ending.

But is she saying Hell, Help or Hello? Knowing that would make all the difference…

Well, I finally managed to get my little ghost story, set in the house on the hill, written. It’s slightly different from my original, which, between you and me, I can’t really remember much about now anyway!

This story is based on some events that I have actually experienced myself, and others are completely made up. As for the teacher whose face appears in the flowerbeds, I have absolutely no idea where that one came from…

29 responses to “Hell, Help or Hello.”

  1. Visionkeeper avatar

    I bet the mansion could be of help TL….Just ask if it knows what the voice is saying and ask to be shown the answer…Be prepared. Ya never know what it might really be saying!!! I am thinking it is part of what is down in the basement….You’ll know soon enough TL…He…He…He… VK

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Not long now, VK. I wonder if I’ll find answers down there… or more questions…

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  2. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    Heh, heh, heh. Nothing like a good ghost story and you’ve given us another one. 😀

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Tess, I like a bit of spookiness every now and then…

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  3. Andra Watkins avatar

    She’s in hell, saying hello to ask for help. The angle of that flower bed must hurt her neck.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Andra, maybe that’s why she’s asking for help…

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  4. lameadventures avatar

    I know exactly what she’s saying, Tom! It’s product placement! “Helen Fielding has brought now 51-year-pld Bridget Jones back in a May-December romance with a 29-year-old guy in ‘Mad About the Boy’”

    And maybe that is kinda scary.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      LA, never! Never would product placement be used anywhere on this blog (apart from the adverts provided by WordPress, and the occasional mention of my personal grooming products under the Twilight name (not linked with any other franchise with the same name!)) Now, have I heard right? Is there a new Bridget Jones?

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  5. nrhatch avatar

    Perfect for your Halloween round up, Tom

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Nancy. I think the Halloween register is getting quite full now…

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  6. prenin avatar

    Good one Tom! 🙂

    I lived in a house like that!!! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Prenin.
      Houses like that are cool!

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  7. shreejacob avatar

    I honestly would have packed my bag and left…lol
    I can be such a wuss!

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Shree, nah! They’re quite friendly when you get to know them!!!

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      1. shreejacob avatar

        Well…ok..if you say so Tom..there are few people I trust in the blogosphere, and you’re one of them…when it comes to astral traveling, dreams and ghosts that is 😛

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  8. Diane Henders avatar

    Ooo, spooky! What a great creepy tale. 🙂

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Diane.
      Some of it’s real… not all of it though…

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  9. Gray Dawster avatar
    Gray Dawster

    Yes the creaking from above whilst in the loft would definitely add to the chills, doors shutting, floorboards twitching, flower beds staring… Yes where did you get that idea from? Perhaps a dream, or a reality that has not yet been realised? Wooooooooooooooooooooooo

    Have fun Tom and keep adding your Halloween treats, you are winning 🙂

    Andro

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Part of this tale was based on the ‘face’ I could see in the previous posts, Andro, part completely made up, and part on things I’ve experienced.
      I think my Halloween creativity is slightly drying up now, but I shall persevere!

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      1. Gray Dawster avatar
        Gray Dawster

        I like a bit of realism mixed in with the fantasy, as it adds to the flavour of the post and yours are certainly offering lots of interest my great friend 🙂

        Keep up the ghoulish work Tom 🙂

        Andro

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        1. Tom Merriman avatar

          I’m glad that you’re enjoying them, Andro!
          That makes blogging all the more worthwhile!

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          1. Gray Dawster avatar
            Gray Dawster

            Yes I am enjoying them, to be honest your style is hard not to find enjoyable my great friend 🙂 Keep up the fine work 🙂

            Andro

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  10. europasicewolf avatar

    Love the atmospheres you create in your haunted tales! Are there rooms above the loft then?!! That would be very strange…and intriguing 😉 I wouldn’t ever look in mirror in that house lol and I don’t think I’d go near the drawers!!! They might eat me 😉 Might make an interesting post though…blogging from within the innards of the drawer…from hell! Maybe that’s what she was trying to tell you…she was trapped in a drawer…swallowed by the jaws of hell!! A warning for you! Ooooh errrr 😉

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      ‘From the innards of the drawer’ sounds like a good title, Icewolf.
      If I write a sequel to this tale, I may use it…
      As for the warning… well, I’ve got the key, remember!? 😉

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        I do! yes! And I’m not sure that’s at all reassuring! lol 😉 😀

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  11. Saturn With Earrings avatar
    Saturn With Earrings

    That was just the right amount of creepy. Hell, Hello or Help. Knowing that would’ve made all the difference in the world. So true. Goes to show how powerful words are 🙂

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Aren’t they just!

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