The Unicorn Challenge: Red Spider


‘It’s ruined.’

‘What is?’

‘My costume. Look at it, outside, drying, ruined.’

Beverly Kingannan looked at her cousin, Vince, sitting in the armchair by the window, his head in his hands. ‘Costume?’ She asked, not really wanting to know.

‘Yes, my costume,’ Vince wailed, flinging both of his arms in the general direction of the double doors that led to the patio outside, ‘I’m the Red Spider. Me. That new superhero who’s been helping people lately, only I can’t do it anymore. Ruined.’

‘The Red… you?’ Beverly looked at Vince again, ‘what exactly do you mean, ruined?’

‘My costume,’ he moaned, ‘my career, my life.’

Dismissing her doubts that her cousin actually was this Red Spider, she asked, ‘but ruined how?’

Vince stood, grabbed Beverly by her hand, and led her out to the patio. ‘Look,’ he pointed again, ‘ruined. I can’t wear that. My reputation will be in tatters. It’s pink. All the red has run through the white bits.’

‘Isn’t that a wetsuit?’ Beverly bit the inside of her cheek.

‘Yes, it’s a wetsuit. A faulty one.  Have you ever heard of a wetsuit’s colours running when it gets wet? Mine has. Look at it. Ruined.’

‘But it’s mostly pink.’ Beverly said thoughtlessly.

‘It was mostly white, with that red section over the chest, shoulders, and back.’ Vince seethed.

‘But if it was mostly white, why the Red Spider?’

‘It was a gimmick name. But no more.’

‘You could be the Pink…’

Vince glared and went back inside.

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr. They provide a photo, and we, in turn, provide something, anything, up to 250 words.

Has the Red Spider’s superhero career finished before it has even began? Will the Pink Spider be hitting the streets soon? And what is Vince’s surname? These questions, and possibly many, many, more may or may not be answered – we will merely have to wait and see…

12 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Red Spider”

  1. Violet Lentz avatar

    Poor Vince. He doesn’t seem to realize one of the only time people could care less what color you are, is when they need help.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Very true, Violet.

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  2. Penn(y) 4 ✍️ avatar

    what Vince’s surname? And by hitting the streets soon, you mean …literally? Squashed sorta thing? Yuck, …a white and reddish pinky mess , …who’s gonna clean it up? And… I know, …shut up,Penn, … enjoyed the scene, … and I’m very carefully back spacing to correct the typos. Done it, bye now, 💫Penn💫

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    1. Tom avatar

      I have no idea at present, Penn. We may know more if we revisit Vince and his friends…

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      1. Penn,… avatar

        Okey-dokey, I shall wait with my usual degree of patience,… it’s one of the many traits i’m well known for. Sort of, …🦋

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  3. Diane Henders avatar

    Hahaha!! Poor Vince. A harsh blow to the ego, but I’m sure the Pi- …erm, I mean “Red” Spider will overcome it. 😉

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    1. Tom avatar

      He probably will, Diane… or his new identity may grow on him.

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  4. jenne49 avatar

    Vince reminds me of an old Schulz cartoon where Lucy is in a sulk and Linus does everything he can think of to cheer her up. He finally asks if there’s anything he hasn’t thought of. And she says ,’Yes. I don’t WANT to be cheered up!’Poor old Vince, though not bold enough to wear pink and to hell with the rest of the world.

    Mm, perhaps that’s not a good sentence for a wanna-be superhero!Cool story, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne.
      Vince needs to tame his ego, methinks, and then he’ll really be flying…

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  5. europasicewolf avatar

    No getting through to some people!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Nope. His ego’s a bit of a barrier…

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        Ego’s usually are!

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