The Unicorn Challenge: The Three of Stars


Myrtle Rance left Ognar at the vintage record stall at the Yelby Manor Fayre, and walked a few stalls down to the indigo-coloured tent, which had a sign above the entrance with a painted crystal ball and the name Madam Bumblebee.

She walked inside, finding an elegantly-dressed lady (in red and gold clothing) sat on the opposite side of a cloth covered round table, with an illuminated crystal ball in the centre. ‘Come in, Myrtle, take a seat.’ Madam Bumblebee spoke slowly and gently.

Wide-eyed and open-mouthed, Myrtle silently walked in and sat on the chair opposite. Without a word, she was handed a deck of cards with a gesture to shuffle them.

She was then asked to select three cards and place them face-down onto the tablecloth.

Madam Bumblebee turned over each card in turn, revealing one depicting six comets, one with eleven moons and one with three starfish. ‘Ah,’ Madam Bumblebee placed a deep red and pointed fingernail onto the third card, ‘the three of stars, most auspicious.’

Myrtle looked at the starfish card with a great longing and anticipation as she clasped her hands together.

‘You have selected the number twenty,’ Bumblebee began, ‘so you will be going where you are going with positivity and joy. Remember that.’

‘What about the three starfish… the auspiciousness?’ Myrtle asked.

‘All are connected…’ Bumblebee whispered, ‘you will see.’

‘Thank you, Susan,’ Myrtle smiled, as she stood to leave, ‘say hello to your mother for me’.

Myrtle and Ognar Rance
Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge, to write something up to 250 words based on a photograph provided by our hosts, Jenne Gray and C E Ayr.

16 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: The Three of Stars”

  1. jenne49 avatar

    Beautifully written fortune-telling scene, Tom.
    And I love the twist at the end.
    We’ve all been there, wanting to believe even although we know who Madame Bumblebee really is – well, at least the women probably have! 😉

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    1. Tom avatar

      Oh yes. Thanks, Jenne.

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  2. Editor, Witcraft avatar

    What, no spoiler alert? 😉

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    1. Tom avatar

      Nope. Not back then, anyways…

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  3. ladysighs avatar

    It’s good to have a fortune telling friend. They give you a positive reading and don’t charge you a cent.

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    1. Tom avatar

      That’s what I do, Ladysighs.

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  4. ceayr avatar

    What a crock!
    Fortune-telling, Tom, not your story!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, CE. I predict you will get this reply eventually! 😊

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  5. clark avatar

    (semi-spoiler alert):
    I am hypo-youthful enough to remember when comic books introduced the concept of what we now refer to as cross-over. This, in case you don’t have a History of Hardcopy on hand was in the time when comic books were published once-a-month (?!?! ikr?)
    In deference to our most considerate hostina, j, I will stop before I say too much!*

    *yeah, ceayr. like that ever happens**
    ** lol

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    1. Tom avatar

      We know all about crossovers, Clark… we’re in the middle of one right now!

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  6. Chris Hall avatar

    Good story, Tom (always interesting with the cards are turned up)

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    1. Tom avatar

      I think so, Chris. Thanks.

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  7. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    You lulled me into your fortune-telling scenario and knocked me on my butt with that hilarious twisteroo at the end. Fantastic storytelling, Tom! I loved it!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Aw, thanks, Nancy. Hehehe! 🙂

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  8. Margaret avatar

    Why not indulge in a little escape into fantasy-land, even if you do know what’s really going on. Good story, and a nice twist.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanls, Margaret… sometimes, you just never know! 😉

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