The Unicorn Challenge: Dusted!


‘I don’t believe it!’ Myrtle Rance stood looking at the outline in front of her.

Glynis Fairchops took a photo on her mobile phone, and said, ‘well, there’s the proof. I knew you wouldn’t believe it, so I had to go and get you and bring you back, so you could see it with your own eyes.’

‘But the mayor?’ Myrtle was stunned. ‘Are you sure you’re right, Mrs Fairchops?’

‘Mrs Rance,’ Glynis protested, ‘now you know me well enough to know that I don’t tittle tattle, not that often, and I’m not tittle tattling about this.’

‘I can’t believe it about the mayor. I saw him only this morning. Me and Ognar, actually, in the fishmongers.’ Myrtle looked up at the hand, ‘it isn’t even finished.’

‘Oh, I hadn’t noticed that,’ Glynis pondered for a second, ‘that’s very odd.’

‘Ah, there you are, my little pomegranate,’ Ognar said cheerily as he walked around the corner to join the two ladies, ‘you don’t look very happy… what’s the matter?’

‘That!’ Myrtle said pointing to the wall in front of her. ‘Look what the mayor’s gone and done… he’s entered this into the village art competition, and they’ve put it up next to your abstract tomatoes!’

‘Don’t worry, my sweet,’ Ognar whispered as Glynis moved along to the next entry, ‘Old Dobbo’s doing the judging, and I helped him to put this picture up here.’ He winked cheekily as he wiped away the last of the chalk dust from his hand.

Myrtle and Ognar Rance

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr, where they provide a photo and we provide up to 250 words. My story this week features a couple of my favourite characters, Myrtle and Ognar Rance!

16 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Dusted!”

  1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Snortle snort!
    Ooh, pardon me! Happens sometimes when I laugh. Fun read, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      🤣 No worries, Nancy… I didn’t notice anything… 😊
      Thank you.

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  2. jenne49 avatar

    Good old Ognar! That was fun, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne. Ognar knows what he’s doing!

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  3. Diane Henders avatar

    A lovely twist – I’m still chuckling! 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      😀 Thanks, Diane.

      Like

  4. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    I don’t trust that Ognar. He’s up to something I think!

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    1. Tom avatar

      He’s always up to something… him and Myrtle! 😃

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  5. Margaret avatar

    Ognar knows what he’s doing. His abstract tomato piece is a sure thing to win. Lots of fun. I love the portrait of Ognar and Myrtle too.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Margaret. They both like getting involved… and being involved! I have a few portraits of them, each one slightly different!

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  6. Chris Hall avatar

    Oh what fun… again! Great stuff, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Chris. I enjoy writing about this couple.

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  7. Liz H-H avatar

    Good lord, those character names. Of COURSE shenanigans must ensue!
    Good one, Tom!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Liz.
      Indeed, these lot are always up to something!

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