The Unicorn Challenge: Swan Lake


Clum peered out over the waters of Lake Sirencio. “There’s no sign. None. Whatsoever.”

Anlagga walked to stand beside him on the shore, handing him a small brown satchel. “Try using these.”

Clum carefully took out the magnifying glasses, set them to maximum zoom, and put them on over his eyes, the rubber strap a little too tight for his larger than average sized head. He handed the satchel back to his wife, complaining about not really needing them. Nevertheless, he continued looking out over the misty scene in front of him. “There! Over on the far side! There’s a whole confusion of them!”

“A confusion!” Anlagga reached for her magnispex, hastily putting them on. “Oh, how beautiful. How lucky are we to see that… on Swanday as well.” She pointed towards the centre of the confusion of camouflaged swans, adding, “There, in the centre, it’s Raydo! He’s looking at us!”

“He’s looking this way, dear, but not at us…” Clum’s voice tailed off as he watched the young carnelian swan swim out from the group before taking off in flight in their direction. He was followed by a pinkneck and three cygnets.

It took less than two minutes for the five swans to reach them.

“He remembers us… after five years!” Anlagga wiped away a tear from her eye as she removed her spex.

The rescue swan, and his family, stayed with the couple who’d saved him for several hours before returning to the confusion on the far shore.

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr. To write up to 250 words using a photo prompt. 

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26 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Swan Lake”

  1. ladysighs avatar

    A fun story, Tom. I wish I knew how you make up the unusual names for your characters. Or maybe they aren’t unusual. What I really want to know is where I can pick up a pair of those magnispex?

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    1. Tom avatar

      Try as I might, Ladysighs, the characters will not tell me the name of their supplier. They tell me THEIR names, no problem, but not their supplier!

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      1. ladysighs avatar

        As you say, so it will be. 😦

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        1. Tom avatar

          Sorry. I’ll try to trick them into revealing things next time I write about them! 🙂

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  2. Doug Jacquier avatar

    You’re on the money, Tom, with this bank of swans.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Doug.
      I’m just waiting now for the account to open!

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  3. Margaret avatar

    A confusion of swans. What a delightful term. Clum and Anlagga are delightful too, as are the ‘magnispex’ and the camouflaged swans and the revelation of the back story at the end. Very nice.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thank you, Margaret. 🙂
      I like the term ‘a confusion’… it works with a lot of things!

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  4. europasicewolf avatar

    Lovely cheery tale to read at some unearthly hour in the weekend work time! It’s just about getting light now and the rain has set in for the morning.So a very nice read to start the day 😁

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    1. Tom avatar

      Pleased you enjoyed it, Icewolf! 🙂

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  5. jenne49 avatar

    Beautiful tale, Tom, with fascinating names. You have a real gift for that, inventing names. And I too love ‘a confusion of swans’.

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    1. jenne49 avatar

      Do you know Paul Gallico’s book, The Snow Goose? Your story brought that beautiful tale to mind again.

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      1. Tom avatar

        Aw… I’m not aware of that tale, Jenne. It sounds like a nice one.

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    2. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne.
      It’s the characters… I let them name themselves! 😁

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  6. ceayr avatar

    Touching piece, Tom.
    Who knew swans remembered faces?

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    1. Tom avatar

      I didn’t, CE, until this story told me!

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  7. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Lovely piece, Tom.
    I have read that swans, like elephants, do not forget; I quite fancy the idea of them remembering faces!
    A confusion of swans. Did you know another collective noun for them is ‘a lamentation’? How utterly poetic.

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    1. Tom avatar

      A Lamentation… yes, a fabulous term, Nancy!
      I never knew that swans never forget… or maybe I did know once, and have forgotten myself! 😆😊

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  8. Chris Hall avatar

    The swans and the three cygnets – this is lovely, Tom!
    (being a scouse, it’s a bevy – of course)

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    1. Tom avatar

      Ah, yes… a bevy! 🤣
      Pleased you like this tale, Chris!

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  9. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    A delightful story, Tom. Swans have feelings too.

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    1. Tom avatar

      That they do, Keith.

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  10. Michael B. Fishman avatar

    I really like stories about the bond between animals and humans and the types of stories where animals remember their helpers from the past are really special. You wrote this well and I like the names you came up with.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thank you, Michael.
      I let the characters name themselves!

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  11. clark avatar

    A little steampunk, an old couple, swans and the water. Ain’t nothin missing here.
    I’m with Ladysighs: you are the Master of Names!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Clark. I allow the characters to name themselves. I change them if they aren’t quite right… 😆

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