The Veil


The fog descended quickly. Before the residents of the village knew it, they were surrounded by a thick pea soup, and they couldn’t see their hands in front of their faces.

Through the murky green, echoing footsteps could be heard. Mocking laughter. Scrapes and clangs. Screams.

Beneath one of the barely visible streetlights, the owner of one such scream stood frozen. He’d looked up at the light and watched as the Veiled Lady peeled herself out through the swirling hypnotic fog.

She began to sing. An enchanting warble that electrified the atmosphere around the villager. He couldn’t resist the temptation to look into the banshee’s hungry eyes.

She blinked and he was surrounded in darkness.

The veil had consumed another.

Elsewhere through the fog, yet another scream could be heard… the veil was feeding well.

20 responses to “The Veil”

  1. Destiny avatar

    keep going, Tom… sending much inspiration for the haunted poem. 👌

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    1. Tom avatar

      There are a few weeks left, Destiny! 🙂

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      1. Destiny avatar

        I’m done
        posted already… 😁

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        1. Tom avatar

          I’ve discovered! 🤣 Hehehe!
          Playing catch up again…

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          1. Destiny avatar

            lol, I’m stuck on the dragon 😬
            sorry for the multiple views… I’m trying different views and angles 😂

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            1. Tom avatar

              When I get onto my big computer, I’ll draw around the dragon to highlight it. It was the first thing I saw when I saw the image… mind you, I very often see other things where I’m looking

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              1. Destiny avatar

                Intriguing… Will give it another try lol.
                just to focus 😬😁

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  2. ladysighs avatar

    You are really in the Halloween mood! And to think it’s only Oct. 5.

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    1. Tom avatar

      I love Halloween, Ladysighs. My favourite time of the year! 🙂

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  3. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Bewitching and beguiling!
    A superb write, Tom. ❤︎✐

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thank you, Nancy.
      ‘Tis the season! 🙂 🎃

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  4. Diane Henders avatar

    Brrr! I see you’re off to great start celebrating Halloween month, Tom. 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      You know me, Diane! I love it!

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  5. Chris Hall avatar

    Superb… and a little scarcely, of course!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Oh yes, Chris… it’s that time of the year! 😄

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  6. europasicewolf avatar

    Oh wow! The Veil is having a feeding frenzy!🤖

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    1. Tom avatar

      Indeed. It was misty here this morning as well, now that I think about it! 😳

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  7. europasicewolf avatar

    Be very careful Tom!!🙃

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