The Unicorn Challenge: Intention


Evangelica May Leafsedge get back down these stairs immediately! The clock tower shook after the ferocity in which the door had slammed shut. Evangelica May… it was pointless. Obviously, it was all the boy’s fault. ‘He’s just a charming rogue’, Doctor Wood said, ‘one with a chiselled jawline and the deepest blue eyes, but a rogue all the same.’

I always try to see the best. When he came calling for Annie, he looked decent enough. Black hair slicked back with a broad smile and shoulders to match, almost a perfect gentleman. It was clear to me, though, exactly what he was after.

Annie fell for him hook, line and sinker. Besotted, she was. Positively floating with her head in the clouds, which made things easier for him. No hypnotism needed on his part – he just used plain, old-fashioned chemistry.

I knew he’d done it as soon as I saw Annie after their walk by the canal that night. Her cheeks were flushed when she came home, but her expression weary, her complexion pale, and her reflection faded as she walked passed the entrance mirror.

The bruise on her neck almost hidden by her collar, she giggled as she floated by, not realising she still had blood stains on her blouse.

He hasn’t been by since, which is odd. Vampires usually stick together, once they’ve sired. Especially with their first. I wonder what Annie did that night to keep him away?

Evangelica May Leafsedge… ah, never mind. She’ll learn.


Written for The Unicorn Challenge. The challenge: to write something up to 250 words based on a picture provided by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr.

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22 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Intention”

  1. Doug Jacquier avatar

    Well, that sucks. 😉

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    1. Tom avatar

      Hehehe! I see what you did there, Doug! 😅

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  2. Misky avatar

    Enjoyed this one!

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    1. Tom avatar

      😃 Thanks, Misky!

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  3. ceayr avatar

    A biting critique of M. Le Comte and his ilk!

    Is the girl’s name significant, Tom?

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    1. Tom avatar

      I had to research M. Le Comte, CE! 😊 I’m taking it to be a certain Count, several times removed, which fits nicely. The biting definitely fits! 😬
      As for the girl’s name… maybe not exactly where this story is concerned… but perhaps for the future 🤔. These characters like to make a reappearance every now and then! 🙂

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  4. pennsivity avatar

    Oh she’ll learn, Tom, …she’ll have more time now, …but no reflection, …means no ability to make-up, …✨👏✨😉✨

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    1. Tom avatar

      That’s true, Penn… but she also has time to practice without the mirror… what else could she do to pass the time? 😄

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      1. pennsivity avatar

        🤔…thought about it, ..and yup, …an eternity to practice , …✨😉✨

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  5. jenne49 avatar

    Oh my! Annie seems to have what it takes!
    Good tale well told, Tom

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne. Annie does seem to know what she’s doing… on first impressions! 🤔

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  6. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Black hair slicked back with a broad smile and shoulders to match, almost a perfect gentleman.
    The definitive word here being “almost”.
    Nice one, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Nancy. I agree. There’s something more to that character, too… just what, however, I can’t quite put my finger on… 🤔

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  7. Liz H avatar

    But was it her blood…or his?
    Maybe there’s a bit of the

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  8. Liz H avatar

    Again, was it her blood…or his
    Maybe a bit of the praying mantis on her?
    Evangelica! Let us prey!

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    1. Tom avatar

      That is the key question, Liz… well, apart from what actually happened. You may be right about Evangelica… we may need to find out more with this one! 🙂

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  9. Chris Hall avatar

    I do like a vampire or two?🧛‍♀️🧛‍♂️

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    1. Tom avatar

      I think you’re in luck, then, Chris… there are one or two vampires around here! 🙂

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  10. europasicewolf avatar

    Oooh! Bit of a twist in the tail there Tom! Didn’t see the end part coming but it was cooooooool! And a touch on the spooky 👻 side! Was he the 🧛‍♂️ 🦇 or was she the vampire 🧛‍♀️ 🦇 I wonder👻🤔Who bit who first?!!🧐👀🤓❗️

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    1. Tom avatar

      There is something seemingly missing in this tale, Icewolf, isn’t there? We may find more clues in a future tale… you never know…! 🤔🙂

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  11. clark avatar

    (it’s gonna be one of those comment-threads, is it?), well, I for one am totally Stoked!
    see, ceayr, what you done started? lol
    I better stake out my claim with some easy ones before Keith shows up!

    lol

    Agree with the others: a) nice twist and 2) maybe the praying mantis might be a subtext

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    1. Tom avatar

      I think I missed your Point on the first part, Clark… 😏
      And thank you… the praying mantis is an interesting thought! 🙂

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