Pickanickl’s Quest


“What a fool I’ve been!” Pickanickl thought as she crouched between the boulder and the ferns, watching Skaglad’s menacing bulky figure lumber along the path ahead. “Of course he’d know I’d be headed to Sound.”

She allowed Skaglad to move away from view, and gave him a few more minutes before standing and heading back along the path she had come.

Ever since she’d escaped the P’tor Caves she knew she had to keep moving, for if Skaglad caught her she would be in more trouble than she had been as Ynayna’s pet.

“May Locke grant me a swift journey!” she whispered, and slipped down a shale-covered slope before regaining her footing. She ran as quickly as she could along the path which brought her to the bank of a river. “Already I’m lost!” she sighed. She looked left and right, trying to decide which would be the best way to go. The bank to the right of her disappeared around a bend, where to the left she saw a straight and clear run. Left it was.

She walked this time, at a quick pace, but not as fast as earlier. She constantly looked around her. Skaglad was a brute but he was no fool, and he would soon realise she’d doubled back.

Pickanickl shortly arrived at an old stone bridge, and decided to cross. However, on the other side she came up against an obstruction. A figure stood blocking her path.

“Now, who do we have here?” he smirked.

More soon…

11 responses to “Pickanickl’s Quest”

  1. Tom avatar

    Very immersive fantasy story – pulls the reader in immediately!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Tom. I’m trying to get back into writing again, and thought I’d revisit something I started a few years ago, but from a different angle.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Tom avatar

        Always good to improve old favourites 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Diane Henders avatar

    A tantalizing cliffhanger! Looking forward to more… 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Diane. The ‘action’ will continue shortly! 😀

      Like

  3. Chris Hall avatar

    I’m hooked, Tom! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Chris. Just got to work out where Pickanickl and the story’s going now!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Chris Hall avatar

        Where ever she and it leads, we will surely follow, Tom! 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Tom avatar

          Thanks, Chris.

          Liked by 1 person

  4. Eugenia avatar

    Oh, my! Very intriguing!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom avatar

      That’s Pickanickl for you, Eugenia!

      Liked by 1 person

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