The Earth’s Turning In Fourteen Lines


Dawn chorus greets the rising Sun
Mist and dew begin to fade
The sky brightens, then the land…
A new day with new opportunities
Serene and magical whatever the weather
To be filled exactly as pleased

Time passes as it so does
Relevant to the deeds being done

Shadows stretch as the day ends
Serendipitous with the Sun’s slow setting
Echoes resound then begin to diminish
Day creatures settle, night ones stir
Twilight half light begins to cool
Once again the shaded side returns

A different Six Word Saturday post.


10 responses to “The Earth’s Turning In Fourteen Lines”

  1. prenin avatar

    Yes, a day in fourteen lines indeed! 🙂

    Well done Tom! 🙂

    God Bless my friend!!! 🙂

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Prenin! 😀

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  2. BeckyB avatar

    wow that’s an impressive fourteen six word Saturday

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Becky.

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  3. Ron. avatar

    Very impressive. Fourteen six-word lines. AND highly crafted at that. My hat’s off, TM. salute!

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thank you very much, Ron.!

      Like

  4. -Eugenia avatar

    Superb piece! Bravo!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thank you, Eugenia! 😀

      Like

  5. anitashree avatar

    Oh you are good! If I took this challenge I’d be struggling with only 14 lines. Mine would be a day in 40 lines 😛 LOL

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      It just takes a ‘little’ editing… thanks, Shree! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

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