The Earth’s Turning In Fourteen Lines

Posted on Mar 17, 2018 by Tom

Dawn chorus greets the rising Sun
Mist and dew begin to fade
The sky brightens, then the land…
A new day with new opportunities
Serene and magical whatever the weather
To be filled exactly as pleased

Time passes as it so does
Relevant to the deeds being done

Shadows stretch as the day ends
Serendipitous with the Sun’s slow setting
Echoes resound then begin to diminish
Day creatures settle, night ones stir
Twilight half light begins to cool
Once again the shaded side returns

A different Six Word Saturday post.

10 thoughts on “The Earth’s Turning In Fourteen Lines”

prenin on Mar 17, 2018 at 9:37 am said:

Yes, a day in fourteen lines indeed! 🙂

Well done Tom! 🙂

God Bless my friend!!! 🙂

Prenin.

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- Tom Merriman on Mar 18, 2018 at 7:55 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Prenin! 😀
  
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BeckyB on Mar 17, 2018 at 10:16 am said:

wow that’s an impressive fourteen six word Saturday

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- Tom Merriman on Mar 18, 2018 at 7:56 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Becky.
  
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Ron. on Mar 17, 2018 at 1:16 pm said:

Very impressive. Fourteen six-word lines. AND highly crafted at that. My hat’s off, TM. salute!

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- Tom Merriman on Mar 18, 2018 at 7:56 pm said:
  
  Thank you very much, Ron.!
  
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-Eugenia on Mar 17, 2018 at 2:00 pm said:

Superb piece! Bravo!

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- Tom Merriman on Mar 18, 2018 at 7:56 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Eugenia! 😀
  
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anitashree on Mar 18, 2018 at 2:49 pm said:

Oh you are good! If I took this challenge I’d be struggling with only 14 lines. Mine would be a day in 40 lines 😛 LOL

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- Tom Merriman on Mar 18, 2018 at 7:57 pm said:
  
  It just takes a ‘little’ editing… thanks, Shree! 😀
  
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