Dawn chorus greets the rising Sun
Mist and dew begin to fade
The sky brightens, then the land…
A new day with new opportunities
Serene and magical whatever the weather
To be filled exactly as pleased

Time passes as it so does
Relevant to the deeds being done

Shadows stretch as the day ends
Serendipitous with the Sun’s slow setting
Echoes resound then begin to diminish
Day creatures settle, night ones stir
Twilight half light begins to cool
Once again the shaded side returns

A different Six Word Saturday post.


Posted by Tom Merriman

A future writer living in the present day

10 Comments

  1. Yes, a day in fourteen lines indeed! 🙂

    Well done Tom! 🙂

    God Bless my friend!!! 🙂

    Prenin.

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  2. wow that’s an impressive fourteen six word Saturday

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  3. Very impressive. Fourteen six-word lines. AND highly crafted at that. My hat’s off, TM. salute!

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    1. Thank you very much, Ron.!

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  4. Superb piece! Bravo!

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    1. Thank you, Eugenia! 😀

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  5. Oh you are good! If I took this challenge I’d be struggling with only 14 lines. Mine would be a day in 40 lines 😛 LOL

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    1. It just takes a ‘little’ editing… thanks, Shree! 😀

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