Enchanted Lake

I hear a voice
It calls to me
With a strange enchanting melody
Ghostly echoes
Come and go
Without a case of urgency
The water’s calm;
A gentle breeze
Hushes
Through the leaves
And all is still…
Even with the chill…
From the whispers of eternity

Oct 4, 2015

Feel GOOD!, Ghosts, Halloween, Rhyme

8 responses to “Enchanted Lake”

Visionkeeper

Oct 4, 2015

Nice one…Much calmer at this spot than being in the Grinds TL…I think you might find a new identity here for yourself 🙂 VK

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Oct 6, 2015
  
  Thanks, VK… and yes. A change is as good as a rest!
  
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prenin

Oct 4, 2015

Still waters run deep – and deadly… 🙂

God Bless!

Prenin.

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Oct 6, 2015
  
  That they do, and are, Prenin!
  
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Diane Henders

Oct 5, 2015

Lovely poem, and a lovely image, too! Thanks, Tom! 🙂

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Oct 6, 2015
  
  A pleasure, Diane… I am pleased that you liked!
  
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Sue Dreamwalker

Oct 8, 2015

Wonderful creation to both Tom

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1. Tom Merriman
  
  Oct 12, 2015
  
  Thanks again, Sue. I sometimes feel an eeriness when looking over still waters
  
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