In Subdued Light


He looked older the night I saw him in the street. He was older; it had been years since I last saw him, but he looked older than he should have done. His eyes, piercing blue as usual, shone out through the darkness. His friendly smile had gone… his friendly face was now stern. They say it does that to you.

He was lost. Gone forever. The night they got him.

He still recognised me, at least he appeared to anyway when he looked at me… or rather, through me. He stopped for a second, and then barged passed, without saying a word.

He slipped away into the shadows without looking back.

That was last month.

I’d rather see him like that, than like this, if I’m honest, but I can’t think that way.

I knew it would end like this. It always does. The stake through the heart is the only way. Seeing him lying there, on the beach, as unsettling as it is, is the best thing for him. He’d ceased to exist the night he was turned; he’d become a living zombie, feeding nightly off the blood of his own victims, sometimes creating his own vampires to carry on his bloodline… to carry out his hunting.

They all end up like this.

At least he looks now like he did when I knew him years ago, and not how he did in the street. Not much good to him now, however, but at least he’s free.

But, I still have my job to do. I have others to catch. Others to free from this curse. It’s them or me. One day, I know they’ll get me, but until they do I will continue with my own hunt… we have to keep this world safe.

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This short story has been written in response to a painting created by Gabriel Garbow, which shows the final scene. Click here to visit his blog – he has some fabulous pieces of work over there!

11 responses to “In Subdued Light”

  1. Let's CUT the Crap! avatar

    You’ve started something here, Tom. I like it. I wonder what happens next, hm?

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I’m glad that you liked the tale, Tess… it’s a bit darker than usual for me, but there is that side with vampires, I suppose. I think with this, though, the fuller story would be what happened before… we’ve started at the end here!

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  2. Visionkeeper avatar
    Visionkeeper

    Just what were you up to TL on that short stint of time off???? I’m almost afraid to ask. Have you changed as well per chance? Do we need to lock our doors at night? VK

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      I’m happy to announce that I’m still exactly the same, VK, no changes here with me! Perfectly safe for unlocked doors in my case… although this tale is a step over to the dark side, it must be said. I do visit the world of vampires occasionally, but usually only go to the light-hearted side of things; I just ventured a little bit further with this tale. I like trying different things every now and then. Normal posts should resume shortly…

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  3. gabrielgarbowota avatar

    Your tale and your picture are chilling. That is an excellent image you created. Those eyes are piercing, yet distant. ‘Gone’. I am honored that my image has inspired such creativity.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Gabriel. For your comment and the inspiration!

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  4. prenin avatar

    Nice piece Tom! 🙂

    You have a book in you my friend! 🙂

    God Bless!

    Prenin.

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    1. Tom Merriman avatar

      Thanks, Prenin. It’s taking a while to surface… I’m still only getting snippets out right now!!!

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  5. penpusherpen avatar

    a dark knight on a quest to rid the world of the living dead. shivers abound, Sir Aquatom, but I have faith in you … and your ability… I’ll just stand behind you, as back up.. sort of thing… 😉 xPenx
    (I love the differing posts, gives one a buffet type of feeling,…. )

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  6. Tom Merriman avatar

    Thanks, Lady Pen… a bit of a dark one, this!
    I like to try to write something different with each post… slightly different, anyway!

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  7. shreejacob avatar

    I like it! Strangely as I was reading it I wondered if it was a story of someone seeing themselves in a mirror or a shop window, pausing and wondering what time had done to him! Only realized later it was a vampire story!

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