Sunrise on Saturn
Is a spectacular sight
With pink fluffy clouds and rainbows of light
The mystical rings shimmer in colours ne’er before seen
Blues that are red
And whites that are green
Oceans of gas and islands of air
Metals are liquid and no life is there
To see the spectacular Saturn sunrise
That for most of the day fills all of the skies
I Like the sound of a Saturn Sunrise (‘twould be a Great Name For a Cocktail ) And The Colours You Describe Sir Aquatom : A Wonderful Feast For The Eyes : xPenx
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aaaah!! and now I can see the picture too, Sir Aquatom, glorious colours…. (my Mobile doesn’t have the power to show any photo’s, you can always tell my mobile comment… name is shown as Pen. instead of the long winded and tiring, penpusherpen of WP … Has your theme changed some again? or just me?) … xPenx
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It does sound like a cocktail, doesn’t it! Glad you liked the colours… My theme looks different to me too, but I haven’t done anything to it…
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You’re getting good at these Tom.
I like the images this created but the colours I saw are my own 😉
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Thanks, Trevor. I’m actually enjoying writing these nonsense rhymes! Glad you saw your own colours; it’s quite hard to describe a colour that has never been seen before! 😉
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Will you give me poetry lessons?
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What a nice question, Emily! Thank you very much.
Although I wouldn’t class my rhymes as poetry, I will say one thing: just write away. That’s how I do it – I get into the flow of what I’m writing about and the words just appear.
Have a look at some of the links in my Blogs To See! page for some far better poets!
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Beautiful poem, would love to see a saturn sunrise 🙂 Saturn is one of the most beautiful planets out there, they all have their own beauty.
Summer
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Thanks, Summer. I like Saturn too…
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