The Unicorn Challenge: The Crypt


Clementine D’Orreur wasn’t overly keen on the sunshine. On the daylight, truth be told. None of her family were; her husband Hector and daughter Noir affected by it more so.

Clementine shuffled back to their crypt, number 50, Shadywell Mews, in Yelby Old Town. Her large dark sunglasses covered most of her pale face with a heavy black woollen shawl covering her head and shoulders. Her long straight black fringe joining shawl to sunglasses.

She pushed open, with a loud creak, the crypt door, which was always slightly ajar. The gargoyle above the door kept out most people, but the inner door kept out the rest (with it always being locked!) She pulled behind her a self-refrigerating shopping trolley.

‘What have you bought now?’ Hector asked, taking a sip from his steaming green brew, as he saw the rectangular contraption.

‘It’s a one-of-a-kind shopping trolley,’ Clementine smiled, ‘it keeps everything cool and fresh. And,’ she lifted the top of the trolley, reached inside, and brought out a framed painting, ‘I picked this up as well for the kitchen.’

‘It’s hideous.’ Hector almost choked when he saw the abstract tomatoes,’I love it!’

‘I bought them from a lovely older couple on a stall in the village market. Both of them were as proud as punch to make the two sales.’ Clementine took a small slip of paper out of her handbag, ‘The painting is an Ognar Rance original… a designer piece, they told me.’

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr. They provide a photo and we provide up to 250 words that have been inspired by it.
Myrtle and Ognar Rance
Clementine and Hector D’Orreur

15 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: The Crypt”

  1. Editor, Witcraft avatar

    A self-refrigerating shopping trolley. Perfect for Australia’s climate. Where can I get one? 🙂

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    1. Tom avatar

      Ognar’s, Doug.
      I don’t think he has any left, though….

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  2. Sue Dreamwalker avatar

    You have the gift of story telling Tom, and your graphics are always wonderful xx

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Sue.
      I just go where the characters lead! 🙂

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  3. ceayr avatar

    I do like the D’Orreurs, Tom, they’re my kind of family.

    You’re carving a niche for yourself with these entertainingly somewhat off-the-wall tales!

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, CE. I blame the Rances.

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  4. clark avatar

    “Her long straight black fringe joining shawl to sunglasses.”

    very excellent description

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks Clark.
      I had a space to fill…! 😎

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  5. jenne49 avatar

    Yelby Old Town is taking shape, with all of these fascinating characters.
    The Ronces in particular are at the delightful heart of it all.
    They know how to make a bob or two.
    And now these most excellent crypt-dwellers.
    ‘It’s hideous…I love it!’ – could only be spoken by one of the aboce – brilliant.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne.
      The photos inspire the characters!

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  6. Chris Hall avatar

    I do like this pair, Clementine and Hector. More please, Tom.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Tom avatar

      They’ll be back, Chris. Like the Rances, I have big plans for them!

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  7. Margaret avatar

    Another fascinating couple of characters in the village. It’s growing. I’d love to see the Ognar Rance painting – abstract tomatoes! A most entertaining story here.

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    1. Tom avatar

      The painting will be appearing soon, Margaret… thank you! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

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