The Unicorn Challenge: Let There Be Light!


Gather round… gather round… my voice echoed around the empty cellar. I say, I say, I say… I laughed, noticing just how small things amuse me.

The light from my torch flickered, creating a strobe effect in the dark room. I was positive I saw a face looking back at me but decided it was merely the particles of dust floating around.

“Are you still down there?” Mensen shouted from the top of the stairs as I tapped the side of the torch to switch it on again. “I’ve got the lights… ‘subdued amber’, as requested.”

“Great!” I replied, and it wasn’t long before Mensen and I had strung the lights, so they snaked around the ceiling. We decided to leave the barrels where they were, thinking they could be used as tables.

Mensen then went back upstairs to switch on the lights, I stayed in the cellar, amusing myself with the echoes. The lights came on in a blinding flash of white, not at all the ambient orange I was expecting.

Instinctively, I shouted aaaaarrrrghhh, wishing due to the echo I hadn’t.

In the bright light, the face I saw in the dust reappeared before me, this time with his full body dressed in old-style clothes, and he too seemed to be screaming as he withered away from view.

Mensen returned, saying, “Ooh, that’s a bit bright,” before looking at me, adding, “it makes your skin look pale… as if you’ve just seen a ghost…”

Posted for The Unicorn Challenge, a magical challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr.

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11 responses to “The Unicorn Challenge: Let There Be Light!”

  1. jenne49 avatar

    Suitably spooky, Tom.
    Nothing like bright light for chasing ghosts, but not before they’ve turned your MC pale.
    Good build up of tension there. And I do like the echo.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne.
      I enjoy a spooky tale!

      Like

  2. ceayr avatar

    Phantom fun, Tom!
    (See what I did there!)

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    1. Tom avatar

      🤣 I C(E), CE! 🤣
      (That worked better in my mind! 😊🙄)

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  3. Chris Hall avatar

    Splendid, Tom!

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    1. Tom avatar

      💡😃
      Thanks, Chris!

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  4. Liz H-H avatar

    Wonderful ghost tale, most scary when only one & is alone with the ghosts!

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    1. Liz H-H avatar

      only one witnesses

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    2. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Liz! It can be scary for the ghost, too! 😄

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  5. Margaret avatar

    This is terrific. He starts off having such fun playing with the echoes but by the end he’s a much more sober man. Bright lights will do the trick when there’s a ghost in the dust eh? I’ll have to keep that in mind. And I’ll have to become more diligent about my housekeeping – who knows where this one might reappear?

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Margaret.
      Yes, it’s always worthwhile bearing this in mind!

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