Haunted

Wary is the soul 
Very cold indeed 
Clock strikes thirteen 
Mocking laughter sounds 
Things bump in the night 
Bring on the nerves 
Eyes stare blankly 
My heart pounds
Til the morning comes
Chilled to the bone 
Very cold indeed 
Wary is the soul
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14 responses to “Haunted”

  1. CMStewart avatar
    CMStewart

    An appropriate October poem, Tom! 🙂 At first I thought the poem read “Mary is the soul,” which made me think the female figure in the poem was a ghost. The second verse, “Very cold indeed” at first confirmed my ghost speculation. I often think of ghosts as being physically very cold, and that’s indeed how she looked to me! The male figure looked rather cold too. So a pair of ghosts. But the setting looked like it could be warm, which only reinforced my idea that they were (stubbornly cold) ghosts in a warm setting! XD

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    1. Tom avatar
      Tom

      Ghosts have a different temperature to their surroundings, CM. Well, the ones I’ve met have. They can feel warm too…
      The pair were intended to be ghosts, so you read them well! 🙂 (I don’t think the female figure is Mary, though! 😉)

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      1. CMStewart avatar
        CMStewart

        Warm ghosts or even hot ghosts. I learned something new today! 🙂

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        1. Tom avatar
          Tom

          Yes… if you were in a REALLY cold room, they’d have to feel warm/hot to let you know they’re there! It’s all in the energy! ✨️🙂

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  2. ladysighs avatar
    ladysighs

    I give you a 10+ on this one, Tom! It was so well crafted I didn’t at first recognize it as a Pioneer. Sometimes the Pioneers turn out silly. This flows nicely!

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    1. Tom avatar
      Tom

      Thanks for the +, Ladysighs! 😊
      The Pioneer Poem form is a proper poetic… form… the silliness and nonsense is an added bonus! 🤣

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      1. ladysighs avatar
        ladysighs

        I’m all in with silliness and nonsense!

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        1. Tom avatar
          Tom

          Yay! 🤣

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  3. Misky avatar
    Misky

    Very clever rhyming couplets, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar
      Tom

      Thanks, Misky. 🙂

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  4. Destiny avatar
    Destiny

    a hauntingly lovely flow, Tom. (naturally a 10, not that we scoring though 😁)

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    1. Tom avatar
      Tom

      Thank you, Destiny. Yes, we’ve gone beyond scoring now, but the idea’s still a good one! 🤣

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      1. Destiny avatar
        Destiny

        I meant we aren’t scoring you, Tom 😋
        😂
        yes, all good and great and you’re welcome. 🤍

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        1. Tom avatar
          Tom

          😄

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