Unicorn Challenge: The Twister


“Hold on tight!” Adam cried over the din, one hand clasped tightly around a bar, and the other gripping the wrist of Little Ava.

Ava screamed, although her tiny voice was carried by the cacophony around her. She pulled herself along the seat and grabbed a tight hold onto Adam.

The day had started fine. The weather good… the skies clear. The funfair opened at 11:00, and by 11:15 they were both clambering into their seat on the ‘Twister’ cyclone ride.

It was then when the weather changed. The sky blackened, and the winds got up, ripping through the fair, tearing down flagpoles and bunting.

The first time Adam realised their carriage had left the ride was when a couple of planters and a handbag flew past them, followed by another carriage and the roof of the ride.

Gracefully, everything was dumped out of the tornado in one place: in a country manor’s garden, by a wooden deck. Adam clambered out of the carriage carrying Ava, carefully.

“Again! Again!!!” Ava pleaded, laughing.

“Not right now,” Adam said, more concerned with how they were going to get home.

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The Unicorn Challenge… a challenge hosted by Jenne Gray and C E Ayr , to write something up to 250 words based on a photo provided by them.

For some reason, when I saw the photo, I didn’t see the street in the background, and did see a wooden decking… the other elements managed to get into the story unchanged!

23 responses to “Unicorn Challenge: The Twister”

  1. pennsivity avatar

    We see what we see, Tom, …and the twister flying adventure was fun, …”again, again”, …👏✨🦋

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Penn. I certainly veered off with this one! 🙂

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  2. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    That was quite a ride! Nice one, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Keith. Rather random, but kind of fun.

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  3. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar

    Fabulously entertaining, Tom, and what a unique take!
    This is exactly why is never go on those damn amusement park rides;
    that, and the nausea! 🎡

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    1. Tom avatar

      I haven’t been on one of these rides for years, Nancy, but this was what came to mind when I saw the prompt photo. Inspiration’s a funny thing at times! 🙂

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  4. Chris Hall avatar

    Not my idea of fun, either!🎡

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    1. Tom avatar

      I don’t mind them, but it’s been a good few years since I last went on one, Chris.

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  5. jenne49 avatar

    A young friend ‘treated’ me to an afternoon at a funfair. After 2 rides I had to go and lie down under a tree till my head stopped spinning. Oh to be like Ava, unaware of the danger and just carried by the thrill. Good take Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Thanks, Jenne. Your treat sounds like a nightmare!

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  6. Doug Jacquier avatar

    Picked it up and flew with it. Great take, Tom.

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    1. Tom avatar

      Exactly, Doug… just went with the flow!

      Like

  7. ceayr avatar

    The thing is, Tom, we don’t want a description of the photo, we want to read what your imagination saw.
    And your imagination went to town big time today!
    Great stuff.

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    1. Tom avatar

      It kind of got carried away a little, CE, I agree! 🙂

      Like

      1. ceayr avatar

        In a very good way, Tom

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  8. clark avatar

    “Aunty Em! Aunty Em!”

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    1. Tom avatar

      🌪… and we’re off…

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  9. clark avatar

    ‘cellent storifying.

    (How much fun it is, when the ‘Gimme that key board… watch how it’s done’ part of our imagination gets the upper hand.)

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    1. Tom avatar

      I love being taken along for the ride, Clark! 😃 It’s very rewarding!

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  10. europasicewolf avatar

    Oopsy! Tornado 🌪 🌀!! No way would I want to go again on that ride thanks! Little Ava is much braver than Little Icy! 😄

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    1. Tom avatar

      She is… good job she doesn’t realise that wasn’t meant to happen on the ride! 🤣

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      1. europasicewolf avatar

        Happily oblivious! Ignorance is bliss!🤣

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